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Surrender

Posted by glorybebe , 03 August 2007 · 105 views

I am not brave enough to put this on the forum, so I will put it here and see if anyone finds it.

Surrender

Sucking at my energy
Yet exalting my senses.
Wanting to collapse
to the bold meandering caresses
cascading along my skin.
Drawing me deeper, deeper
to final surrender,
A surrender I cannot give.





I like it yes.gif
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QUOTE(_Nyx_ @ Aug 2 2007, 10:53 PM)
I like it yes.gif

thank you.  I have a hard time sharing my writing, I guess I am a wimp! LOL
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Daughter of the Nine Moons
Aug 03 2007 01:07 PM
very nice original.gif
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distortedpandy
Aug 03 2007 01:29 PM
I likes! grin2.gif
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why not post it in the forum, its good.
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Thumbs up sweetie!
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