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Pondering Thoughts

Posted by RedDusk , 12 November 2013 · 235 views

This is a new thing I was trying with my poetry, so my apologies if its a difference from my usual poems and you dislike it.

He sits alone in his bed
staring at the ceiling
thoughts of her spinning in his head

to him it doesn't make sense
all the lies he was fed

In the past love didn't exist
it was another word for manipulation
not a feeling but a stimulation

It all changed when he met her

Love did exist
it was just hidden
shrouded in mist

Now six months later
He sits alone in his bed
Staring at the ceiling
Thoughts of her spinning in his head.

Copyright © Aadrian Kelley

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