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Prisoner

Posted by Hasina , 28 February 2013 · 350 views

I'm a prisoner

Flesh and genes are walls and bars

Locked up tight; the key's unforged






This is well written and powerful, showing the frustration that we humans have to face in life.  Yet the very fact that you know what you have written, shows that there is more to it than that.  If what you wrote was true, the paradox would be that you could not write it.  It is that part of you that desires greater freedom that shows that the door is is not completely closed and can be opened if only slowly.  This is your soul speaking.

You are very gifted with the ability to use few words to say a great deal.

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I probably have some sort of neurological disorder too.
I'm not 100% sure right now though.
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