orangepeaceful79 Posted November 17, 2012 #1 Share Posted November 17, 2012 I tried to write a poem but today it just doesn't seem to be working damn words are jumbly-mumbly like pulling teeth or excalibur ooh wait! a metaphor two actually maybe this poem will breathe its first breath still... dot dot dot....my fingers tap a smile curls my lips how clever am I to have turned the lack of a poem into a poem I wonder if you the reader will appreciate my wit or if you will move along without "liking" it at all I am not always aware of the amount of flotsam drifting in my stream of consciousness but here it is, just the the same what a damn mess. 3 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mistydawn Posted November 17, 2012 #2 Share Posted November 17, 2012 ha ha ha ha ha !!! Good one! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
orangepeaceful79 Posted November 17, 2012 Author #3 Share Posted November 17, 2012 ha ha ha ha ha !!! Good one! Thanks very much Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SpiritWriter Posted November 17, 2012 #4 Share Posted November 17, 2012 reading the 'tap tap tap' of a poets mind is always intriguing... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
orangepeaceful79 Posted November 17, 2012 Author #5 Share Posted November 17, 2012 reading the 'tap tap tap' of a poets mind is always intriguing... Thanks Although I'm quite certain my brain is a very overtaxed hamster running on a rusty wheel. Wonder how much longer the lil guy will hold out? 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Still Waters Posted November 17, 2012 #6 Share Posted November 17, 2012 *likes*....It's a clever piece. 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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