The Id3al Experience Posted December 12, 2012 #1 Share Posted December 12, 2012 Breaking Free Break free from the paddock Break free from the bond Break free from the shackles Free to see beyond. Break free from emotion Break free from unconscious act Break free from the lies you tell yourself, Free to see ALL the facts. Break free from the idea Break free from the myth Break free from that thought, Free for a consciousness shift. 4 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Professor T Posted December 12, 2012 #2 Share Posted December 12, 2012 Kapai! Brilliant.. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
e u n O i a Posted December 12, 2012 #3 Share Posted December 12, 2012 This was a lot of fun to read. I read it out loud too! I like it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Id3al Experience Posted December 12, 2012 Author #4 Share Posted December 12, 2012 (edited) Kapai! Brilliant.. Thank you Professor T. Kapai? You know Maori? or from New Zealand? Kind Regards, Me This was a lot of fun to read. I read it out loud too! I like it. Im glad you enjoyed it, This is only my second poem I have produced so far. I am really loving expressing myself this way. Kind Regards, Me PS. Welcome to UM Edited December 12, 2012 by The Id3al Experience 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Professor T Posted December 12, 2012 #5 Share Posted December 12, 2012 Thank you Professor T. Kapai? You know Maori? or from New Zealand? Kind Regards, Me Kiora! Yeah, I'm from the land of the long white cloud.. Pakeha.. That poem is spot on imo. It's something people should live by as well as a great piece of work. The only thing I don't like about it is I didn't write it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Id3al Experience Posted December 12, 2012 Author #6 Share Posted December 12, 2012 Kiora! Yeah, I'm from the land of the long white cloud.. Pakeha.. That poem is spot on imo. It's something people should live by as well as a great piece of work. The only thing I don't like about it is I didn't write it. Haha, Nice - Same here good old Pakeha from good old wellywood (haha). Thank you, this is only my second poem, but after I mediate the mind is so clear and easy to let it flow. Im sure you are capable of writing also - "we are move than we think, we only fail to see this becasue we act like we know" 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Professor T Posted December 12, 2012 #7 Share Posted December 12, 2012 (edited) Haha, Nice - Same here good old Pakeha from good old wellywood (haha). Thank you, this is only my second poem, but after I mediate the mind is so clear and easy to let it flow. Im sure you are capable of writing also - "we are move than we think, we only fail to see this becasue we act like we know" Naki lad me. Yeah, I write, and draw, and make sculptures.. My Avatar is one of mine.. Check out the writers & Artist Forum.. http://www.unexplain...hp?showforum=68 Edited December 12, 2012 by Professor T Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Id3al Experience Posted December 13, 2012 Author #8 Share Posted December 13, 2012 Naki lad me. Yeah, I write, and draw, and make sculptures.. My Avatar is one of mine.. Check out the writers & Artist Forum.. http://www.unexplain...hp?showforum=68 LOL why is it that I seem to attract Naki people lol.. couple of my best mates are from there. ha. Nice Forum, I like your art, very talented, and love your alien avatar. I use to be a really big drawer however branched off into music playing drums etc. Now it seems poetry is the newest form of expression. I love art and the beauity that can be portrayed through such methods. Keep up the good work. Kind Regards, Me 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Professor T Posted December 13, 2012 #9 Share Posted December 13, 2012 LOL why is it that I seem to attract Naki people lol.. couple of my best mates are from there. ha. Nice Forum, I like your art, very talented, and love your alien avatar. I use to be a really big drawer however branched off into music playing drums etc. Now it seems poetry is the newest form of expression. I love art and the beauity that can be portrayed through such methods. Keep up the good work. Kind Regards, Me Thanks.. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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