SHaYap Posted February 14, 2013 #1 Share Posted February 14, 2013 (edited) your gentle breath caresses the plains, who shall care if you scream through valleys; and thunders off the cliffs. the unending roar, shaking them unto dust. your gentle gaze silently stills the night, who shall care if you steals life through dreams; and drowns a universe of reality. the unceasing sight, exposing them as dust. you can disguise yourself but your heart, can't be hidden, inconcealable. your gentle tears swells the oceans, an eternal sea to wash away the blood; and still the land is red. the restless rust, reducing all to dust. you can flee but where you go, your heart as is your shadow is with you. your gentle heartbeat tingles to the soul, who shall care if it is torn apart; and lightly scattering with the wind. the realisation, remembering all is dust. your gentle warmth billows a heavy heart, who shall care if it is asleep; and buoyed in a middle of a dreamed galaxy. the beginning and the end of all as dust. and from dust and to dust ... ~third_eye @SHaYAP©2013 Edited February 15, 2013 by Still Waters fixed typo 3 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Still Waters Posted February 14, 2013 #2 Share Posted February 14, 2013 Very good Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SHaYap Posted February 15, 2013 Author #3 Share Posted February 15, 2013 Very good my eyes are failing me, be a dear and fix typo on "your gentle gaze slently (silently) stills the night," for me? thanks ye ~I needs new seeing eye glasses but they don't come in threes 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Still Waters Posted February 15, 2013 #4 Share Posted February 15, 2013 my eyes are failing me, be a dear and fix typo on "your gentle gaze slently (silently) stills the night," for me? thanks ye ~I needs new seeing eye glasses but they don't come in threes Fixed.......seeing as you asked me so nicely Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SHaYap Posted February 15, 2013 Author #5 Share Posted February 15, 2013 Fixed.......seeing as you asked me so nicely and I was about to beg ... wuff woof ! 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Knight Of Shadows Posted February 15, 2013 #6 Share Posted February 15, 2013 i like your " shadows of poems " very often great job Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SHaYap Posted February 15, 2013 Author #7 Share Posted February 15, 2013 i like your " shadows of poems " very often great job thanks you kindly have you been to my cavern ? one stop directory to my other stuff ... 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Knight Of Shadows Posted February 15, 2013 #8 Share Posted February 15, 2013 thanks you kindly have you been to my cavern ? one stop directory to my other stuff ... i saw this line in horror movie where the victim get killed in those caverns Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SHaYap Posted February 16, 2013 Author #9 Share Posted February 16, 2013 (edited) i saw this line in horror movie where the victim get killed in those caverns really ? been cleaning up the cavern but have yet to come across any dead bodies not even a spider ... lotsa empty beer cans ... Oh! bring own beer still applies Edited February 16, 2013 by third_eye Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mistydawn Posted February 16, 2013 #10 Share Posted February 16, 2013 Made me want to cry, but it was awesome. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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