SHaYap Posted March 6, 2013 #1 Share Posted March 6, 2013 (edited) Momentary lapses of indecision, boldly intrudes a mental reservation, flowers beams with morbid delight. A slow process of decay, kept fresh and bright. Rudimentary oversights of prudence, lays to waste a preservation of mind, blossoming of surreptitious regrets. Cover the mirrors; hide me from my sight. Plush fluffy meadows, sparkles of wild flowers, technicolor dots on the living green plains, as wide as a sea, petals adorning dews; gleaming shower of my reflections, kisses of Apollo. the body has to die, it is to only keep you for as long as you are meant to be here, it is a vessel for your journey through life, it is not life, you give it life, the body is but animata; with this vessel you sail a life journey, with all that lives at a precious time that you share, it is your container of what you gather on this voyage; the fulfillment from the realms of pleasure, unquenchable dreams stolen from the continents of love, harbors of happiness scattered among treacherous illusions; treasures lurks among precarious wrong turns, smell the gaping crevices of greed, see the echoing emptiness of hate, hear the blissful terrain of ignorance. if the body does not die, will you not be trapped perpetually without end ? on edge, pincers ripping out my impatience, I’m here, with me, it's okay, I will be fine… ~third_eye @SHaYAP©2013 Edited March 6, 2013 by Still Waters added a word at OP's request 5 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SHaYap Posted March 6, 2013 Author #2 Share Posted March 6, 2013 (edited) PLease help ... me ... please Would some nice,kind, omnipotent mod person please edit last line of para3 from : gleaming shower of reflections, kisses of Apollo. to : gleaming shower of my reflections, kisses of Apollo. thanks ye kindly in advance ~edit : caution !!! sleepy typist on the keyboard, increased occurrences of typonese expected ~edit 2nd : suck up level too low Edited March 6, 2013 by third_eye 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Still Waters Posted March 6, 2013 #3 Share Posted March 6, 2013 PLease help ... me ... please Would some nice,kind, omnipotent mod person please edit last line of para3 from : thanks ye kindly in advance ~edit : caution !!! sleepy typist on the keyboard, increased occurrences of typonese expected ~edit 2nd : suck up level too low Your wish is my command Edit completed. It's a great poem btw, well done 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SHaYap Posted March 6, 2013 Author #4 Share Posted March 6, 2013 Your wish is my command Edit completed. It's a great poem btw, well done hmmmm ... biscuits ? thanks and much thanks ~ i bow ~ 2 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Still Waters Posted March 6, 2013 #5 Share Posted March 6, 2013 hmmmm ... biscuits ? thanks and much thanks ~ i bow ~ biscuits......yes please! and you're welcome 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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