Twisted Mystic Posted November 12, 2005 #1 Share Posted November 12, 2005 SOMETIMES Sometimes, I'm a human: pale, fragile, and full of oxygen. Sometimes, I want to slit my wrist to see if my blood is as red as yours. Sometimes, I'm a girl: overtly feminine and insanely jealous. Sometimes, I want to shred pink bows and break my lipstick. Sometimes, I want to listen to country music and waver in the pain of the world. Sometimes, I like silence: black, cold, and dead. Sometimes, I'm me: boorish and boring, unkempt and uncaring. Sometimes, you're you: closed and conceited, self important and self imposed. Sometimes, I'm an optimist: chipper, cheery, and looking into the future. Sometimes, I want to stop breathing to hold back these tears. Sometimes, I'm your girl: as long as I walk your path. Sometimes, I want to shred my skin and break my stride. Sometimes, I want to listen to rock music and pour my pen on paper. Sometimes, I like noisy: white, warm, and alive. Sometimes I'm me: batty and brainy, unloved and unloving. Sometimes you're you: cool and collected, self serving and self aware. Sometimes, I want to pull back my skin to look at my insides. Sometimes, I want to leak into the Earth. Sometimes, I want to rot away. Sometimes, I want to live. Sometimes, I want to breathe. Sometimes, I want to lick the curve of your mouth. Sometimes, we can't always have what we want. © 2005 Destiny M. New Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BigDaddy_GFS Posted November 12, 2005 #2 Share Posted November 12, 2005 OMG!!!! That is great stuff!!! I love it. You'll be getting a PM from me!!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Twisted Mystic Posted November 13, 2005 Author #3 Share Posted November 13, 2005 Thank you! Oh, forgot to mention... it's to my fiancee. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
nativechick1989 Posted November 13, 2005 #4 Share Posted November 13, 2005 That's an awesome poem, Twisted Mystic! I can totally relate to some of what you are saying. Keep it up, you have a talent!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
candy gurl Posted November 13, 2005 #5 Share Posted November 13, 2005 i loved it. i can't wait for your next post! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dan_27 Posted November 13, 2005 #6 Share Posted November 13, 2005 I get the feeling from your poem that you were purging, or letting off steam. (Maybe I’m wrong, that’s just what I feel) I know how it feels. Sometimes I listen to a few choice songs that speak to me, and help me maintain my grip on sanity. It's very nice to read words from your heart. Dan. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Twisted Mystic Posted November 17, 2005 Author #7 Share Posted November 17, 2005 I just wanted to thank you guys for all the positive feedback Sorry I didn't reply sooner. Busy busy! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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