STIX Posted February 13, 2006 #1 Share Posted February 13, 2006 Her Impression Yesterday the sun shone across a dense barrier of my heart. Illuminating only the surface. Failing to penetrate my inner atmosphere. Bleak discomfort. Feigned stability leads me to suffocation. An angel has been sent. She whispered in my ear overnight. Her words warm my soul. She has given me reason, pride. Belief in a better self. The thick barrier of my once sewn heart melts away in single file. Dripping into glorious vulnerability. Her eyes, I have not seen, for two weeks on end. But for her words, they seep into my soul, reminding me of her impression. I am caught-up on her impression. Although the future is perilous, I feel no fear. For a lack of uncertainty will always compliment my absence of doubt. Today the sun shines onto this courageous earth and into our beautiful hearts. Reminding me of your impression. My question is, darling, would this day be so fine, as for you to accept my Valentine? There is this girl I really like. Will this totally flatter her? or make her think I'm creepy? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
nativechick1989 Posted February 13, 2006 #2 Share Posted February 13, 2006 Well, after reading that and speaking as a girl . . . she'll be crazy not to be flattered! Awesome poem, very imaginative and creative . . keep up the good work. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
STIX Posted February 13, 2006 Author #3 Share Posted February 13, 2006 WICKED!! well then if she doesn't like it or whatever then I know she is not the right girl for me Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
tiddlyjen Posted February 13, 2006 #4 Share Posted February 13, 2006 oooh thats sooooo lovely!You're very creative Stix oooh so sweet lol Jen xxx Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
STIX Posted February 13, 2006 Author #5 Share Posted February 13, 2006 Thank you. Thank you very much! I'm glad you liked it... and if you want, it can be for you too!! LOL Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
tcgram Posted February 14, 2006 #6 Share Posted February 14, 2006 Wonderful poem!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Stellar Posted February 14, 2006 #7 Share Posted February 14, 2006 (edited) Aww, jeez man... Now you've got ME writing one (Yes, you heard right, ME!) Look what you did: Tomorrow Yesterday the sun shone, Piercing the sky in all its radiance. Yesterday the stars sparkled, Piercing the night in all their splendour. Their beauty was lost, Lost amongst me, For the only radiance I see Is yours. Today the sun rose, Pierced through the atmosphere, Illuminated the caverns on the surface. Tonight the moon rises, Piercing through the starlight, Illuminating the valleys of the Earth. Today you walked along my side, Your radiance piercing the barrier of my life, Your beauty illuminating the valleys of my heart. Tomorrow? Alright, alright, I'm not too creative and used some similar parts, so sue me Edited February 14, 2006 by Stellar Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
STIX Posted February 14, 2006 Author #8 Share Posted February 14, 2006 HAHA yah you stole my sun piercing thing... but thats ok, it was almost even better then mine I must say, good job! I wrote a different one: A Rose From Heaven. I pick for you, a beautiful rose from the heavens above. No earthly rose will do. It is the only one who truly reflects your beauty. This rose grows alongside sparkling diamonds. Surely portraying the rarity of such an elegant woman. And although this garden is intended for gods and goddesses, My mortal soul has captivated them only for you. And oh how this beauty does radiate across our universe. It is truly intended for such a beautiful goddess. Happy Valentines Day! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Stellar Posted February 15, 2006 #9 Share Posted February 15, 2006 HAHA yah you stole my sun piercing thing... but thats ok, it was almost even better then mine I must say, good job! Lol, almost. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
^SolidSnake^ Posted February 15, 2006 #10 Share Posted February 15, 2006 This isn't really a poem it's just something I used to take the p*** out of emo's with (how mature)..well they started it anyway... As I walk through the carnage and evil or life, one beautiful miracle stands out and tall like as a beautiful flower. Like a miracle untouched by darkness...and that flower was you. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Stellar Posted February 15, 2006 #11 Share Posted February 15, 2006 You know... I really wouldnt mind hearing the girl I gave it to at least mention it in a convo... lol Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nadal Posted February 15, 2006 #12 Share Posted February 15, 2006 Wonderful job the three of you. Valentine's day brings the romance from us all. It's just too bad I don't do well in poetry...or anything romantic. The most 'flattering' thing I did today was give her a $100 Valentine basket full of chocolates and other assorted goods. Good luck mates. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Stellar Posted February 15, 2006 #13 Share Posted February 15, 2006 Good luck mates. Luck, lol, thats EXACTLY what I need. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
nativechick1989 Posted February 16, 2006 #14 Share Posted February 16, 2006 Wow . . . that is an awesome poem!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nighteyes Posted February 19, 2006 #15 Share Posted February 19, 2006 I love both of them, and if the girl doesnt like the frist one then she isnt worth being with, and she shoul live a very unhappy life. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
strangebutsmart Posted March 1, 2006 #16 Share Posted March 1, 2006 great poem that is for the holiday that I hate most. (nah just kidding valentines is in between). Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Stellar Posted March 1, 2006 #17 Share Posted March 1, 2006 Meh, I dont like Vday at all. Both the day itsself, and the concept behind it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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