Poems

[dreamhunter]

Peoms

I feel like righting poems

Here goes one.

As I look through the window.

I see the rain, her tears, gently fall down.

She calls for me.

I feel her pain and sorrow.

Until i see her face in the clouds.

She brightens my day, she loosens me up.

He warm waves cover me with love.

He arms quickly cover me from the darkness.

I know it's not much for you.

But i hope this will do.

.....For my two girl friends Nicole and sammi, My rain and sunshine.

Edited February 15, 2006 by dreamhunter

[Yelekiah]

Nice the relation with tears and rain.

[nativechick1989]

That's good . . . filled with emotion. Keep it up, your technique and form will improve.

[The Original Chupa King]

Is this a poetry thing?

I aint great at poetry but that was perty....real perty.

[STIX]

Yeah I guess its not the best "poetry" but it has very good emotions attached to it! YAY!! I liked it

[dreamhunter]

Thank you

you can wright poems here too, if you want.

Here's another.

I lie in wait, for winter to end,

The icy chills of cold wind,

Make my heart sour with pain,

The trees they die,

The flowers be frozen.

As the sun sets my eyes grow darker.

My heart listless of love.

I lie in wait for winter to end.

The spring she calls.

Her lovely hands bring the flowers up again,

Her romantic scent brings joy to us all,

and yet i lie in wait.

I see through the gloryous sun,

I see my love at my eyes corner.

I can feel her warmth a mile away.

And yet today, she's gone.

I mourn her loss. For soon summer comes and i lose her

in order to wait for her return.

I lie in wait.

For spring is late.

Edited February 16, 2006 by dreamhunter

[Yelekiah]

I like the "listless of love" part

[dreamhunter]

thanx, i like your sig.

[The Original Chupa King]

My poetry? Mwaahahahaha!

Riding across the air

softly

Seeing the tree-tops

twirling

Watching people work inside

quickly

Sirens blaring on the road

loudly

People screaming, people shouting

Will they catch you?

No.

Thing go faster, faster, faster...

Splat.

[^SolidSnake^]

Those who read the Valentine's Day Poetry post would have noticed I am a very talented poet...here is the second masterpiece...ahem:

Her beauty still the same, yet so full of pain.

[dreamhunter]

Kewl.

[strangebutsmart]

here is a poem that is unfortunately true. this poem is called: life, hate, and depression.

The majority of people so full of darkness

some of the people so full of rightuesness

everybody waiting for you so they can make you cry

and you sitting, ignoring,full of shy.

then you get depressed your mind lost of hope.

Then you get stressed and whatever they say to you, you say nope.

Then you notice that once they start rock'n

they won't stop. Then you commit suicide *gunshot*

and you go to hell.