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#1    third_eye

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Posted 11 June 2013 - 10:28 PM

one each to a man
men, boys  fathers and sons ... all stirred to lofty brave honorable servants,
in loins for love and hearts for blood lust,
how many wielders of killing instruments, doth ye want of empty hands ,
... what numbers doth the lying whispers that ye hear of heaven demands ?

one each to a man
lofty morale seeping out of pores.... a seeking to just what deemed unjust,
the ones that keeps a upper hand ,
thus spills blood and returns a murderer, whence forth was just a kindly man ,
who shall return, who shall live and who shall fill the gaping graves ?
... a debt to ever patient death, ever awaits the cold final earthly embrace ?

where upon the deadly tips and of every murderous edge,
a clarion for the pouring of vengeful red,
balanced a beacon upon it all that is life,
for what blinded justice should decide, who should be for truth and just ,
thus when to be in the end ... the greater,
mindless a massacre is in a final, a judged blessing of a pleased divinity,

one each to a man ,
what hearts should be that is unmoved ... what desires so grand that it doth denies,
the love of women for sons and husbands or youthful brides for lovers and fathers undone,
even with woeful tears they doth sincerely drench ... each one each to a man,
brother to brother ... man to man ... of red of blood ... within every vein ...

stand forth ye before thy gaping graves ,
barely fifty paces, hardly a stride of yards to ten,
flooded now of tears, flowing still of heated blood,
limbs and bodies, lifeless now ...
whence once was the pride of nations and joys of life,

what consolation there be now ,
what sayeth the crying whispers ye hears of heaven that still it doth demands ?

of one each to a man ... from man from each and every one






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~edit : I can't help myself ... I should stop now lest I toss it in the bin

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Edited by third_eye, 11 June 2013 - 10:33 PM.

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#2    Still Waters

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Posted 15 June 2013 - 09:53 AM

Good poem....very dark.

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Posted 15 June 2013 - 09:58 AM

View PostStill Waters, on 15 June 2013 - 09:53 AM, said:

Good poem....very dark.

what can I say ... I peered deeper into the depths of what there is within I guess ...

A promise for you m'lady .... the next few ones at least will be more jovial ...  ;)

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Posted 15 June 2013 - 10:05 AM

View Postthird_eye, on 15 June 2013 - 09:58 AM, said:

A promise for you m'lady .... the next few ones at least will be more jovial ...  ;)
:D ......but you must always write what pleases you :tu:

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Posted 15 June 2013 - 10:09 AM

View PostStill Waters, on 15 June 2013 - 10:05 AM, said:

:D ......but you must always write what pleases you :tu:

Ahhh ... but I do ... do I do ... shoo be doo bee do ... :lol:

this one just hit me out of the blue ... it was just one of those weeks ... I guess //

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Posted 17 June 2013 - 01:06 PM

How did I miss this one third_eye? Very pensive and insightful. It is somewhat like something out os Shakespheare......:)

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Posted 17 June 2013 - 02:26 PM

View PostCloudshill, on 17 June 2013 - 01:06 PM, said:

How did I miss this one third_eye? Very pensive and insightful. It is somewhat like something out os Shakespheare...... :)

I tried to lighten it and failed .. that's when I went ye olde English ... otherwise it was a bit ... shall we say ... vicious // :lol:

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one each to a man
men, boys  fathers and sons ... all stirred to lofty brave honorable servants,
in loins for love and hearts for blood lust,
how many wielders of killing instruments, doth ye want of empty hands ,
... what numbers...

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