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{un}holy haiku (Part 2)


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#871    joc

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Posted 04 October 2012 - 03:28 AM

pain is eternal
sometimes excruciating
pain is a good thing

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now i know that light is old and stars are cold

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Posted 04 October 2012 - 04:22 PM

pain is a good thing
but to limited extent
very personal

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Posted 04 October 2012 - 05:06 PM

very personal
keep it to myself hidden
exposure brings shame

Life is all too much ............................................. and not enough.

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Posted 04 October 2012 - 05:15 PM

exposure brings shame
human faces used to blush
now flash baboon butts

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Posted 04 October 2012 - 08:24 PM

now flash baboon butts
the ASSumption is revealed
deep in the forest

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Posted 05 October 2012 - 04:13 PM

deep in the forest
watching myself walking down
path of fallen leaves

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Posted 05 October 2012 - 05:13 PM

path of fallen leaves
shining gold in morning light
leaf following leaf


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Posted 05 October 2012 - 07:45 PM

leaf following leaf
as pages flicked before eyes
contents not noted

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Posted 05 October 2012 - 07:49 PM

contents not noted
consumeronomicon
it's self-combustible

Edited by Helen of Annoy, 05 October 2012 - 07:55 PM.

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Posted 05 October 2012 - 09:21 PM

it's self-combustible
no need for anothers spark
imminent kaboom

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Posted 06 October 2012 - 07:16 AM

imminent kaboom
bowels twisting and contorting,
I'd better leave the room.


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Posted 06 October 2012 - 01:07 PM

I'd better leave the room
time to go, time to go now
the end draws closer

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Posted 06 October 2012 - 01:23 PM

the end draws closer
dark clouds blanket mourning skies
goodnight to the sun


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Posted 06 October 2012 - 01:49 PM

View Postsarah_444, on 06 October 2012 - 01:23 PM, said:

the end draws closer
dark clouds blanket mourning skies
goodnight to the sun
goodnight to the sun
the world is black with no stars
deepness awakens

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Posted 06 October 2012 - 06:47 PM

View Postjoc, on 06 October 2012 - 01:49 PM, said:

goodnight to the sun
the world is black with no stars
deepness awakens

Deepness awakens,
all light is forsaken,
Stars rearanging.





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