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Started by Mistydawn , Nov 06 2012 03:35 PM

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#1    Mistydawn

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Posted 06 November 2012 - 03:35 PM

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The sun going down
Birds flock together, flying to roost
And I am waiting

The air chilling
The clock ticking, ,boom boom
And  I am waiting

Night into day
Day into night, nervous my plight
And  I am waiting

Shadows gather  in the room
Tomorrow looms, uncertainty blooms
And yet still, I am waiting.

Bowing head
Reminiscent thoughts, candid and frank
Waiting

Hovering near
Every loathe-some fear, dread knocks
And I am waiting

Expectant  tremors
Diagnosis death, and yet
I am waiting.
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Posted 06 November 2012 - 03:57 PM

that's brilliantly written and gloomy in good way
aren't we all always waiting ? :D
it's very nice i like it

Allah, there is no God but He the Living the Eternal. no slumber can seize Him nor sleep

to Him belongs all that is In heavens and earth. who is there can intercede In His presence except what He permits

He knows what lies before them and what is after them. Nor shall they comprehend of his knowledge except as He wills

His throne extends over the heavens and earth

the preserving of them fatigues Him not and He is the most High and Glorious

#3    Mistydawn

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Posted 06 November 2012 - 03:59 PM

thank you Knight, appreaciated.
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Posted 06 November 2012 - 05:34 PM

That was so good.  It seems we are all waiting, sometimes for something that will never comes.

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Posted 06 November 2012 - 05:41 PM

Thank you Hilander for your thoughts
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Posted 06 November 2012 - 07:05 PM

tick tock..... very well written Misty.
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Posted 07 November 2012 - 03:49 PM

View PostStill Waters, on 06 November 2012 - 07:05 PM, said:

tick tock..... very well written Misty.
Thank you so much for your support Stilly.
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Posted 08 November 2012 - 04:25 AM

very nice..

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Posted 09 November 2012 - 08:04 PM

Thanks for your comment Prof T
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