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[Leave Britney alone!]

Falling notes linger in the air
after arguing over
who cares?
I do you don't
feelings that won't go away
but you dispelled them
and me

Ants covered a stepping stone
ignored their mound for days
poison the old-fashion way
but now the sand won't go away
hoping for a good hard breeze
or else I'll have to get the blower
I forgot a broom would be easier

Fly to me or sail
candle flames burn to the saints
don't be afraid
dreams only light the way
rain will heavy your wings
wind will rise the waves
fly inbetween the two
take care

[Hilander]

If someone doesn't seem to care about your feelings or how you feel then they probably don't care about you.

[Leave Britney alone!]

Actually the first stanza is about two people in a relationship, the statements apply to both of them since they both think the same about the other, even if they do care for each other they just do not know how to show it.

Relationships of all types are a skill and some who suffer from personality disorders have a hard time with all relationships. Nothing that you said but some do think if someone does something like not show they care that maybe they do not deserve to be in a relationship but I assure you even those who do suffer from personality disorders and at times might seem like they do not care (symptom) also are human and need relationships too.

Additional notes on this poem for any interested parties: the first stanza is the past, the second is the present, and the last is the future. Or to be more specific the first is the problem, the second is the solution, and the last is the hard work required to get there, you know the place that normal people get to go to with having a healthy relationship.

This poem gives me great hope. I wrote it to myself.

[Mistydawn]

Excellent.