Tedez84 Posted November 20, 2005 #1 Share Posted November 20, 2005 Okay well i don't really think i am all that good at poetry but i try.. I have done several poems that i have posted on poetry.com. And ill show you some... My Dad With hands of steel And a heart of gold I love you, my daughter, Was always told. With a wife to keep Eight kids to feed He had lots to do To fill our need. He drove a truck He worked a farm He did all this With grace and charm An automobile accident That fateful day Took my dear father So far away Now God has him near So close by his side I'll see my dad someday And smile with pride I got an editors choice award from this poem, When I Think Of You ~To My Love~ Whenever I am all alone. I sit and think of you. I close my eyes and see your smile, and hear your soft voice. In my mind I hear you say, Honey, I love you. You make me feel so special, as only you can do. I envision us together and all that we will do. The love and happiness we'll share, will be a dream come true. I imagine us when we are old, looking back on all we've shared. We'll still have that sparkle in our eyes, for our love can't be compared. So, when I sit and think of you I feel such happiness. You're my love, my life, my everything, you are the very best My brand new poem... Do You Miss Me? Do You Miss Me After rainfall, When rainbow appears! Or when your eyes shed tears, Because I was the one who gave you cheers. Do u miss me. When you have something to share, Or A beautiful dress to wear, Because nobody is there to admire. I dont know, weither you miss me or not But Let me tell you I never missed u, Because I have not forgotten you. Your rememberence keeps my soul bright. Your love is light. In the day and in night. And when you holds me tight, Every thing becomes alright. That's why I never missed you, Because you are the theme of my dreams Or there's this one: My favourite. Never-ending Love If all the world passed me by and offered me to choose, The greatest treasure of them all, I'd only want you. If life went on forever and promised me wealth and fame, I'd only pause to notice at the, mention of your name. Of all that life has given me, and all that's left to do, I'll never have a greater gift, then a moment shared with you. Hope you enjoyed it... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
nativechick1989 Posted November 20, 2005 #2 Share Posted November 20, 2005 Wow . . those are awesome poems, tedez84! "My Dad", makes me think of my Uncle. He was a strong man who loved, sheltered and protected his family. I miss him so much!! Awesome poems, keep it up! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tedez84 Posted November 20, 2005 Author #3 Share Posted November 20, 2005 (edited) Thanks well the My Dad poem was for my very best friends dad... But i was trying to picture what i felt in her shoes and what i saw..But thank you for your response Edited November 20, 2005 by Tedez84 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
foxylatina107 Posted November 20, 2005 #4 Share Posted November 20, 2005 All very nice poems:) If the first is based on a true story my best regards to you! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tedez84 Posted November 20, 2005 Author #5 Share Posted November 20, 2005 All very nice poems:) If the first is based on a true story my best regards to you! no my friends dad... My dad is very well..but thank you for the reply Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
-JfS- Posted November 20, 2005 #6 Share Posted November 20, 2005 I like your poems. Keep up the good work Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
cloud_dancer Posted November 22, 2005 #7 Share Posted November 22, 2005 (edited) those poems are all wonderful, the first one reminds me of my dad, thank you for sharing them Edited November 22, 2005 by cloud_dancer Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tedez84 Posted November 24, 2005 Author #8 Share Posted November 24, 2005 Well last night i lost a friend of mine, he commited suicide. so my mind ran..and i made a few poems up quick. Of how i feel and so on. Hope you's like em. Wings Of The Angels by Trish Deschamps A gentle wind blew cross the land Reaching out to take a hand For on the winds the angels came Calling out a friend's name. Left behind, the friends tears Loving memories of the years Of joy and love, a life well spent And now to God a friends sent. On angel's wings, a heavenly flight The journey home, towards the light To those who weep, a life is gone But in God's love, 'tis but the dawn. ~ .I Didn't Get a Chance to Say Goodbye. ~ By: Trish Deschamps I didn't get a chance to say goodbye To you, to say What now must be one long, unbroken cry Of pain, now that at last you've gone away. I cannot tell you what a joy it was To be the one to tend you in your need. The burden was a gift, for giving does Not burden one who loves, though loving bleed. I wish I could have been with you when you, Perhaps aware, perhaps not, turned towards death Alone, with no one there to wonder to, To share your fear, your hand, your one last breath. I wish, I wish, I wish . . . but it is done, And now I must surrender what is gone. ~ .When death must come at Christmas time. ~ By: Trish Deschamps When death must come at Christmastime, There is a special grief, A mourning that must mix with joy, A pain that must be brief. There is an anguish underneath The labyrinth of light That longs for simple emptiness To contemplate the night. But life must bubble on its way And pleasure be put on, For neither sorrow nor delight Is ever left alone. And, like the Virgin, we must smile With enigmatic grace As we receive the fragile gift That nothing can replace. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
hippiegirl Posted November 24, 2005 #9 Share Posted November 24, 2005 Sorry to hear about your loss Tedez84 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Exterminator Posted December 10, 2005 #10 Share Posted December 10, 2005 I wrote a small poem once which was a clue in a story.. (horror story written by me )---- Misted through the gloomy mountains, Far behind the mankind's curtains, Lies a castle fearing the lights, Lives a demon waiting for fights, From this path crossers cannot escape, Those who dare will be in a death cape, A Demon, which can be killed by a single soul, After the death from this one's role, Again, reborn soul will be wandering through the shadows, Waiting for another to come into gloomy meadows..... Don't ask for the meaning. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Exterminator Posted December 29, 2005 #11 Share Posted December 29, 2005 May your soul live happily in heaven TEDEZ84's friend.. Don't worry, your friend will come one day and that day even the greatest power of God will not be able to break your friendship... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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