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Tedez84

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Okay well i don't really think i am all that good at poetry but i try.. I have done several poems that i have posted on poetry.com. And ill show you some...

My Dad

With hands of steel

And a heart of gold

I love you, my daughter,

Was always told.

With a wife to keep

Eight kids to feed

He had lots to do

To fill our need.

He drove a truck

He worked a farm

He did all this

With grace and charm

An automobile accident

That fateful day

Took my dear father

So far away

Now God has him near

So close by his side

I'll see my dad someday

And smile with pride

I got an editors choice award from this poem,

When I Think Of You

~To My Love~

Whenever I am all alone.

I sit and think of you.

I close my eyes and see your smile,

and hear your soft voice.

In my mind I hear you say,

Honey, I love you.

You make me feel so special,

as only you can do.

I envision us together

and all that we will do.

The love and happiness we'll share,

will be a dream come true.

I imagine us when we are old,

looking back on all we've shared.

We'll still have that sparkle in our eyes,

for our love can't be compared.

So, when I sit and think of you

I feel such happiness.

You're my love, my life, my everything,

you are the very best

My brand new poem...

Do You Miss Me?

Do You Miss Me

After rainfall, When rainbow appears!

Or when your eyes shed tears,

Because I was the one who gave you cheers.

Do u miss me.

When you have something to share,

Or A beautiful dress to wear,

Because nobody is there to admire.

I dont know, weither you miss me or not

But Let me tell you I never missed u,

Because I have not forgotten you.

Your rememberence keeps my soul bright.

Your love is light.

In the day and in night.

And when you holds me tight,

Every thing becomes alright.

That's why I never missed you,

Because you are the theme of my dreams

Or there's this one:

My favourite.

Never-ending Love

If all the world passed me by

and offered me to choose,

The greatest treasure of them all,

I'd only want you.

If life went on forever

and promised me wealth and fame,

I'd only pause to notice at the,

mention of your name.

Of all that life has given me,

and all that's left to do,

I'll never have a greater gift,

then a moment shared with you.

Hope you enjoyed it...

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Wow . . those are awesome poems, tedez84!

"My Dad", makes me think of my Uncle. He was a strong man who loved, sheltered and protected his family. I miss him so much!!

Awesome poems, keep it up! :tu:

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Thanks well the My Dad poem was for my very best friends dad... But i was trying to picture what i felt in her shoes and what i saw..But thank you for your response

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All very nice poems:)

If the first is based on a true story :( my best regards to you!

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All very nice poems:)

If the first is based on a true story :( my best regards to you!

no my friends dad... My dad is very well..but thank you for the reply

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those poems are all wonderful, the first one reminds me of my dad, thank you for sharing them :)

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Well last night i lost a friend of mine, he commited suicide. so my mind ran..and i made a few poems up quick.

Of how i feel and so on. Hope you's like em.

Wings Of The Angels

by Trish Deschamps

A gentle wind blew cross the land

Reaching out to take a hand

For on the winds the angels came

Calling out a friend's name.

Left behind, the friends tears

Loving memories of the years

Of joy and love, a life well spent

And now to God a friends sent.

On angel's wings, a heavenly flight

The journey home, towards the light

To those who weep, a life is gone

But in God's love, 'tis but the dawn.

~ .I Didn't Get a Chance to Say Goodbye. ~

By: Trish Deschamps

I didn't get a chance to say goodbye

To you, to say

What now must be one long, unbroken cry

Of pain, now that at last you've gone away.

I cannot tell you what a joy it was

To be the one to tend you in your need.

The burden was a gift, for giving does

Not burden one who loves, though loving bleed.

I wish I could have been with you when you,

Perhaps aware, perhaps not, turned towards death

Alone, with no one there to wonder to,

To share your fear, your hand, your one last breath.

I wish, I wish, I wish . . . but it is done,

And now I must surrender what is gone.

~ .When death must come at Christmas time. ~

By: Trish Deschamps

When death must come at Christmastime,

There is a special grief,

A mourning that must mix with joy,

A pain that must be brief.

There is an anguish underneath

The labyrinth of light

That longs for simple emptiness

To contemplate the night.

But life must bubble on its way

And pleasure be put on,

For neither sorrow nor delight

Is ever left alone.

And, like the Virgin, we must smile

With enigmatic grace

As we receive the fragile gift

That nothing can replace.

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I wrote a small poem once which was a clue in a story.. (horror story written by me :devil: )----

Misted through the gloomy mountains,

Far behind the mankind's curtains,

Lies a castle fearing the lights,

Lives a demon waiting for fights,

From this path crossers cannot escape,

Those who dare will be in a death cape,

A Demon, which can be killed by a single soul,

After the death from this one's role,

Again, reborn soul will be wandering through the shadows,

Waiting for another to come into gloomy meadows.....

Don't ask for the meaning.

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May your soul live happily in heaven TEDEZ84's friend..

Don't worry, your friend will come one day and that day even the greatest power of God will not be able to break your friendship...

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