Rocky_Rox_407 Posted September 14, 2008 #1 Share Posted September 14, 2008 Hi! It's Rockie. Recently I've been wanting to let go. Found the way to do it is screaming at the top of my lungs singing...or write stuff down. So I clean my thoughts up and so, for your entertainment and for my release, I'll be posting my poems and stuff here. Sometimes they'll be dark, and sometimes silly. And sometimes senseless but it's therapy for me. Here ya go! Thanks for reading. Know that there will be more lol Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rocky_Rox_407 Posted September 14, 2008 Author #2 Share Posted September 14, 2008 MY OWN Written By: Keri [Rocky] I thought I was me, Though you brought me here. I want my own space. I'm the enemy For being independent. You are innocent. But that's a false face. You try to invade my world. Did you like the view? No. Don't come again. Locked you out for a reason. Just leave me alone. But can't do that, huh? Things would be great if you did. Trust me...oh! You don't! Well, is your problem. The more you push me away, Does not affect me. For I am MY OWN! No, you don't have to like me... But....you DID birth me. Now you're stuck with me. Deal with it or kick me out. Either way, I'm ready. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hissie Sola Posted September 14, 2008 #3 Share Posted September 14, 2008 Very good rocky Writing is good to get stuff out of your head/heart, keep it up Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
She-ra Posted September 14, 2008 #4 Share Posted September 14, 2008 Awe Love ya sweet angel♥ So very wonderfully written and passionately portrays for feelings with Mum, Keep your chin up. ♥♥♥ Jody Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Helen of Annoy Posted September 14, 2008 #5 Share Posted September 14, 2008 Oh, Rocky, I like it. BTW My mom was stuck with me too It took only about 35 years but now we finally understand each other. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rocky_Rox_407 Posted September 14, 2008 Author #6 Share Posted September 14, 2008 Thanks guys for the comments! I'll continue to write. lol Helen Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rosewin Posted September 15, 2008 #7 Share Posted September 15, 2008 That was really great Rockci. The emotion is all there which makes the poem live with it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Iron Sheik Posted September 15, 2008 #8 Share Posted September 15, 2008 For I am MY OWN! No, you don't have to like me... But....you DID birth me. I liked that part a lot. Good job, Rocky. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rocky_Rox_407 Posted September 15, 2008 Author #9 Share Posted September 15, 2008 First off, thanks guys. Really like the comments and feed back Second, I have a whole lot more. Mother took away my laptop...so I started writing...now the first two was when I was angry. But the ones after are some when I relaxed some and just started to flow. I wrote these in the order that I posted them. You Vs. Me By: Keri [Rockie] I don't understand. What have I done wrong this time? ...why do I bother...? I stay to myself! I do nothing to deserve all the things you say. I feel what you feel. All the anger and hatred. All the love is gone... ...I want my own life... But you keep holding me back. What is your purpose? Why dominate me? Especially at my age, I need to grow up. Let me or lose me.* I would rather you lose me. Can't take anymore. There's nowhere to go... Physically...and mentally... Stuck in this prison. Your words are like knives. But I quietly take the blows. Thought your hands were worse... But the more I'm quiet, It's the angrier you get! So then, what to do?! You will not tell me, And I don't care to know. I am me...not you... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rocky_Rox_407 Posted September 15, 2008 Author #10 Share Posted September 15, 2008 (edited) Confused Always By: Keri [Rockie] {For this one look at the first letter for each line} Can it really be my fault? Or is it you that has to change? No on will know but yourself. Fix your problems and stop creating mine. Under laws of nature, you should nurture. So why have you stopped? Everything and everyone changes, Did you not? Aren't you human like me? Like my "crazy" friends? Why ridicule us when insanity's your friend...O.o Anyways, confused I am and always be You're the main reason for it... So do something different, or I'm gone Edited September 15, 2008 by Rocky_Rox_407 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rocky_Rox_407 Posted September 15, 2008 Author #11 Share Posted September 15, 2008 Day and Night By: Keri [Rockie] Daylight. Signals the Sun. Stretches so far and wide. Fills the heart, soul, and mind with life. Morning. Twilight. Signals the stars. Everything so peaceful. The tranquility welcomes sleep. Nightime. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hissie Sola Posted September 15, 2008 #12 Share Posted September 15, 2008 Wow Rocky, there's so much emotion in your words..... makes me want to hug you I hope life doesn't bring you down too much. Keep smiling! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rocky_Rox_407 Posted September 15, 2008 Author #13 Share Posted September 15, 2008 hehe a silly one dedicated to Cloudshill CLOWNS! By: Keri [Rockie] Clowns are spawns of the devil. Evil on so many levels. They invade your dreams and sleep. Smiles on their faces they keep. ...Scorpion SKIP THIS ONE! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hissie Sola Posted September 15, 2008 #14 Share Posted September 15, 2008 ...Scorpion SKIP THIS ONE! Great. Did you have to say that at the BOTTOM of your poem? I'll get nightmares for sure now... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rocky_Rox_407 Posted September 15, 2008 Author #15 Share Posted September 15, 2008 Love Meets Hate By: Keri Love Eternal, contagious Living, breathing, everlasting Universal, free, earned, avoided Breaking, spreading, staining Harsh, painful Hate Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rocky_Rox_407 Posted September 15, 2008 Author #16 Share Posted September 15, 2008 HAHAHAHAHAHA Scorp!!!! I'm sorry!!! *hugs* Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rocky_Rox_407 Posted September 15, 2008 Author #17 Share Posted September 15, 2008 World of Music By: Keri [Rockie] Sweet Music. Lovely sounds Take over me Drowning me slowly Filling all my senses. Opens eyes to a new world. Colours and notes swirl around me, Me, dancing in sync with the rhythm. Song's over. Reality settles back in. Having to leave the musical world For the cold, real world breaks my heart... The aftereffects linger, For the song is there, Always playing. Forever, It plays. Sweet. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rocky_Rox_407 Posted September 15, 2008 Author #18 Share Posted September 15, 2008 Nothing Compares By: Keri [Rockie] Nothing compares to you. Gold's value compares not, to yours. Your words are precious. Sun's brilliance compares not, to yours. For that I'm gracious. No words are enough to express And let you know you're the best [Dedicated to: She-ra] [no worries...no one will be left out I promise...just give me time] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rocky_Rox_407 Posted September 15, 2008 Author #19 Share Posted September 15, 2008 (edited) 'nother silly one for two of my best buds. WHOO! By: Keri [Rockie] Our Dodgers Are winners... ...Red Sox are not... OHHHH! (Dedicated to: Cipher and TwilightBandit) Edited September 15, 2008 by Rocky_Rox_407 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rocky_Rox_407 Posted September 15, 2008 Author #20 Share Posted September 15, 2008 ME = YOU![hehe] By: Keri [Rockie] Cool! Brain twins are awesome! You understand. I too understand. Most of our thoughts are shared. Even facial expressions We bring each other much laughter, Quite enough to bring tears to my eyes I am sure the same happens to you. I can see you smiling while you read. You know you can't help it, dear. It's fine. I am too! It's "twinnity". You're awesome, Brain twin! Yay! [Dedicated to: The_Scorpion] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
She-ra Posted September 16, 2008 #21 Share Posted September 16, 2008 Nothing Compares By: Keri [Rockie] Nothing compares to you. Gold's value compares not, to yours. Your words are precious. Sun's brilliance compares not, to yours. For that I'm gracious. No words are enough to express And let you know you're the best [Dedicated to: She-ra] [no worries...no one will be left out I promise...just give me time] I LOVE YOU LITTLE ONE ♥♥♥ Thank you so much Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hissie Sola Posted September 16, 2008 #22 Share Posted September 16, 2008 ME = YOU![hehe] By: Keri [Rockie] Cool! Brain twins are awesome! You understand. I too understand. Most of our thoughts are shared. Even facial expressions We bring each other much laughter, Quite enough to bring tears to my eyes I am sure the same happens to you. I can see you smiling while you read. You know you can't help it, dear. It's fine. I am too! It's "twinnity". You're awesome, Brain twin! Yay! [Dedicated to: The_Scorpion] I loved it! Thanks, you always make me smile, love ya girl! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
xCrimsonx Posted September 16, 2008 #23 Share Posted September 16, 2008 Very well placed! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rocky_Rox_407 Posted September 16, 2008 Author #24 Share Posted September 16, 2008 Love you guys too! ♥♥♥ *hugs* [NOTE: Still have more to post...just letting everyone take in these first...plus I haven't written them ...bear with me ] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rocky_Rox_407 Posted September 16, 2008 Author #25 Share Posted September 16, 2008 Ya know...I was thinking... My poem "Love Meets Hate" has more meaning than I thought... See the type of poem it is, is called a diamante. In the fourth line, I was to write two words about my first noun ["love"] and two words about the antonym ["hate"]...then from then on till the end of the poem I'm to describe the antonym. Now go back and read it...it's hard to tell apart the difference...for people earn love and some avoid it. Love breaks, Love spreads, Love stains. Love is harsh and love is painful...so in a way and in some case love = hate. Then there are those cases in which people loves hate or hates love... Sad concept. Well...one of my random thoughts...there will be more, I'm sure. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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