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[_Only]

They told me to find myself
But I didn't know where to look

I know there is something more to me
But where?

I can feel it so close
But reach out and touch air

I don't know how to chase it
Or even where to start

Surely it is smarter than me
And better fit to make us meet

So I look forward and wait patiently
For someone who belongs by my side

I will keep looking out
Vowing to not take a step in the wrong direction

I will be a statue
I won't turn my back

Pushing out the fear in the back of my mind
That it may be doing the same

[_Only]

Well, I just realized I wrote a few lines out of order. Should have been this:



They told me to find myself
But I didn't know where to look




I know there is something more to me
But where?




I can feel it so close
But reach out and touch air




I don't know how to chase it
Or even where to start




Surely it is smarter than me
And better fit to make us meet




So I look forward and wait patiently
For someone who belongs by my side



I will be a statue
I won't turn my back



I will keep looking out
Vowing to not take a step in the wrong direction





Pushing out the fear in the back of my mind
That it may be doing the same

Edited by _Only, 28 January 2013 - 07:04 AM.

[SpiritWriter]

[Leave Britney alone!]

Awesome vigil of twin flames.

I like the affirmations the main character recites. The mission, seems serious, these things always are.

[MedicTJ]

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"I will be a statue
I won't turn my back"

I love that line.  The entire thing is good, but that just resonated with me.

[Mistydawn]

Excellent -Only. I wish I could write like you.

[Still Waters]

Very good