j4k3 Posted January 3, 2015 #1 Share Posted January 3, 2015 First poem i've attempted in like 5-6 years. Was never a big write but was in the mood for some odd reason tonight. Dont hate too hard please! --- I just wish i could go back to the times where man was free... you live on your own will and die by your own priorities. --- --- tying to fulfill what one expects of you...tells you when you can s**t and what to do. --- --- slaving away 2/3rds of your life at a job you hate... only to go home and sleep the other 8 --- --- We all live once and dont have enough time... living by unfair, unjust, and unequal guidelines! --- --- we're all struggling and in need... while the elite look down on us with greed. --- --- Thinking maybe one day they will change, until then we'll all live insane. --- Live people.™ hope you all enjoyed! - j4k3 << 2 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JVG Posted January 3, 2015 #2 Share Posted January 3, 2015 A little depressing but it has some good parts and makes sense... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SHaYap Posted January 3, 2015 #3 Share Posted January 3, 2015 As soon I read a Line I hear Snoop Dog doing on of his Jiv'n ~ all I know is he ain't Snoop Dog no more ... ~ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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