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Nessie

Posted by Still Waters , 22 March 2011 · 127 views

Deep down in murky water
She tries to hide away
Hoping no-one will see her
Too scared to come out and play

Peace and quiet is all she wants
To be left alone at best
So here she hides from prying eyes
At the bottom of Loch Ness

Cruise boats full of tourists
Each one hoping for a shot
Of Scotland's famous monster
But is she real or not?

So next time you visit the Highlands
And sit beside the beautiful loch
Don't be surprised if you can't see her
Nessie......is she here or not?

schizoidwoman
Mar 22 2011 01:47 PM

Love it!

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Still Waters
Mar 22 2011 02:23 PM

Thank you!

This is an older one I'd posted in Writers forum nearly 2 years ago now, so thought I'd add it to my blog

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RedDusk
Mar 22 2011 02:47 PM

Awesome!

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thefinalfrontier
Mar 22 2011 03:16 PM

Very well done SW, I love it, You do pretty good at your poems my friend and I always look forward till you strike again, :yes:

Roger:)

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Still Waters
Mar 22 2011 04:04 PM

Thank you both, glad you liked

I'm glad I started this blog now. It's a good place to store my poems, not that I've written that many. There's still one or two older ones to come yet and there's a couple of new ones posted in Writers forum just now which I'll put in here afterwards too.

Thanks to everyone who has posted on my poems, I appreciate it a lot!