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A good place to raise a family (poem)

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#1    Avatar Samantha Ai

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Posted 26 March 2013 - 06:13 PM

there is a cathedral
carved in stone
the priests have long gone
our bed was put in place
right under the sanctuary
a good place to raise a family

there is a forest
carved for wood
the choppers have long gone
our crops were put in place
right under the sun
a good place to raise grain

there is a silence
carved in my soul
the demons have long gone
our hopes were put in place
right under our God
a good place to raise spirits

there is a violence
carved in my country
the soldiers have long gone
our laws were put in place
right under ourselves
a good place to raise a family

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Posted 14 April 2013 - 11:21 AM

Very well written! :)

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Posted 14 April 2013 - 06:43 PM

Wow what transitions you have in this space. Thank you. :)

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Posted 15 April 2013 - 03:01 AM

I love the true freedom and cause of this. It would, indeed, be a great place for family and flourish.
I've always imagined just getting off the grid somewhere and living without all of those things that most mankind nowadays cannot seem to live without.
No cellphones, internet, computers, or anything of the sort. Just the knowledge of survival and some good books to read(cannot sacrifice books).

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Posted 16 April 2013 - 01:33 PM

Very good....I liked it

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