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#1    BlezzyWafflesMoosey98

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Posted 09 March 2013 - 01:21 AM

Go ahead and look right through-
Through this empty shell of a girl.
I’m invisible, you can’t see me
Nor can you see the pain that lives inside
Day and night
All the time
Never ending or leaving me

And loving her
The one that doesn’t love back
She looks through me too,
Though she claims she knew
Knew about everything
That’s why she cared

But now I know
No one comes close
No one sees me
I’m invisible
That’s all I’ll ever be



#2    ImaLoner

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Posted 09 March 2013 - 01:41 AM

Poignant.  I would say more, but I am biased.  I loves you Blezzy!


#3    BlezzyWafflesMoosey98

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Posted 09 March 2013 - 01:42 AM

Thanks, Ima. ^^ Appreciate it.


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Posted 09 March 2013 - 01:46 AM

If someone doesn't see you then they aren't worth seeing.


#5    BlezzyWafflesMoosey98

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Posted 09 March 2013 - 01:54 AM

But what if the person is so special? Like, you aspire to be as good as them?


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Posted 09 March 2013 - 02:45 AM

fantastic poem.. keep them coming

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#7    BlezzyWafflesMoosey98

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Posted 09 March 2013 - 02:47 AM

Okay, will do.


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Posted 09 March 2013 - 06:51 AM

There's nothing like being over 60 for being invisible. It used to bother me, but I've figured out ways to use it to my advantage. And I'm also inspired by a poem written by Nikki Giovanni, especially these lines: we are all imprisoned in the castle of our skins and some of us have said so be it if i am in jail my castle shall become my rendezvous  my courtyard will bloom with hyacinths and jack-in-the-pulpits  my moat will not restrict me but will be filled with dolphins sitting on lily pads and sea horses ridden by starfish.


#9    BlezzyWafflesMoosey98

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Posted 09 March 2013 - 12:35 PM

Wow... Wish I could write poetry like that. XD But that's amazing, thanks for sharing that with me





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