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#1    Ever Learning

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Posted 12 February 2013 - 04:46 PM

im ever day dreaming and in a world of my own,
unlike extroverts my thoughts arnt always expressed,
im missed out,  im left feeling alone.

a strangers eye contact is hard to keep,
shyness taken as rudeness,
is enough to make an introvert weep.

i prefer an intimate gathering as opposed to talking in  group,
altho my opinion is ready,  
my words falter
and my eyes begin to droop.

when asked my opinion, ive forgotten my thoughts.
in attempt to have all eyes off me
i give my opinion in short.

ive rushed my words, their meaning not understood.
their eyes pass on and im left regretting not saying the eloquent words i should.

my thoughts are still my own with no one to blame,
the simpleton who doesnt talk
shall ever be viewed the same.

My apoligies for getting emo on you :)

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Posted 12 February 2013 - 04:58 PM

Great poetry AE! Very... relatable. Wonderful arrangement of words :tu: :tu: :tu:

“Still round the corner there may wait, A new road or a secret gate,
And though I oft have passed them by,
A day will come at last when I, Shall take the hidden paths that run,
West of the Moon, East of the Sun.”

#3    Ever Learning

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Posted 12 February 2013 - 05:08 PM

View PostBNDGK, on 12 February 2013 - 04:58 PM, said:

Great poetry AE! Very... relatable. Wonderful arrangement of words :tu: :tu: :tu:
thanks, its my first official bit of poetry :)
the rest of my poetry are two comments  and love poem that shall remain my own ;)

Edited by Armchair Educated, 12 February 2013 - 05:09 PM.

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Posted 12 February 2013 - 05:11 PM

:tsu:  Wow first one? Very great!!! I'd love to see lots more!!!

“Still round the corner there may wait, A new road or a secret gate,
And though I oft have passed them by,
A day will come at last when I, Shall take the hidden paths that run,
West of the Moon, East of the Sun.”

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Posted 12 February 2013 - 05:17 PM

Terrific verse Armchair! If isolation and how it makes you behave and feel can be worded, you have done it!

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Posted 12 February 2013 - 05:38 PM

View PostBNDGK, on 12 February 2013 - 05:11 PM, said:

:tsu:  Wow first one? Very great!!! I'd love to see lots more!!!
i might move through the emotion spectrum

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Posted 13 February 2013 - 01:00 AM

i can relate to this... very well done

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Posted 13 February 2013 - 09:00 PM

Very honestly expressed words. Great job AE. :)





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