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{un}holy haiku (Part 2)

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 Started by sarah_444 , May 08 2012 02:50 PM

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#46    Blue Star

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Posted 24 May 2012 - 06:24 PM

A winner of loss
he reaps all that he has sown
mother nature cleansed

Edited by Blue Star, 24 May 2012 - 06:24 PM.

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Posted 25 May 2012 - 01:20 AM

mother nature cleansed
sunbeams push way through dark skies
lush dripping  forest

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Posted 25 May 2012 - 10:35 AM

lush dripping  forest
we shall not be forgiven
for wasting the dawn

Edited by joc, 25 May 2012 - 10:35 AM.

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once i believed that starlight could guide me home
now i know that light is old and stars are cold

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Posted 25 May 2012 - 07:20 PM

for wasting the dawn
one need only gaze westward
in silent repose
One's reality is another's nightmare.

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Posted 25 May 2012 - 10:16 PM

in silent repose
body still, mind ranging free
extends beyond me

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Posted 29 May 2012 - 10:50 AM

extends beyond me
universes vibrations
include everyone
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once i believed that starlight could guide me home
now i know that light is old and stars are cold

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Posted 29 May 2012 - 04:48 PM

include everyone
creating friends, karma sings
hearts woven like webs

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Posted 30 May 2012 - 05:09 PM

hearts woven like webs
silk of soul, safety net will
catch the falling world
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Posted 30 May 2012 - 07:33 PM

catch the falling world
in arms wider than Cosmos
hold against warm heart

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Posted 30 May 2012 - 09:27 PM

hold against warm heart
the infinite one moment
illumination
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Posted 30 May 2012 - 09:41 PM

illumination
I turn as it hurts my eyes
burned image remains

Edited by _Only, 30 May 2012 - 09:42 PM.

I love to make mashups! Click to hear them!
I also love taking pictures! Click to see them!
I love to play drums, too! Click to rock!

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Posted 30 May 2012 - 10:02 PM

burned image remains
swirling spots of colour dance
close your eyes and see

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Posted 30 May 2012 - 10:50 PM

View Postsarah_444, on 30 May 2012 - 10:02 PM, said:

burned image remains
swirling spots of colour dance
close your eyes and see

close your eyes and see
the many colors in the world
that you can create
In your lifetime, try to be the person your pet thinks you are.
Until one has loved an animal, a part of one's soul remains unawakened.

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Posted 30 May 2012 - 11:01 PM

That you can create
easier to destroy though
than to give it life

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Posted 30 May 2012 - 11:02 PM

Edit: beaten to the punch

Edited by sarah_444, 30 May 2012 - 11:03 PM.

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