Mr Ed Posted July 14, 2005 #1 Share Posted July 14, 2005 Hello my fellow writers and poets. I have not really made a decent contribution to this forum and I have spent 14 years writing the following poems. 14 long hard years. My publisher said they were really good and that he will get right back to me. Ben is nick fury. (Yes I do know him, I don't write poems like this for strangers). So remember guys, fourteen years. Pie Oh how I weep, Chicken and Asparagus do not go, yet they are mixed together and sold! Where are thou Chicken and Asparagus? Why is there no chicken pie solo? Ode to Ben/nick fury He may not be great, at times he is simple. He is not a good man, but he is a man. This is his ode, may his name be forgotten. A Small Note Emptiness, Swirling all around. The silence is heavy, no Ben to fill it. He hath died, his organs harvested. I hope you read these guys, I know I will have finally earned all of your love and respect once you have read such pieces or art. There is no point in being modest. I know my poetic abilities. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
saladins follower Posted July 15, 2005 #2 Share Posted July 15, 2005 did u try that poetry .com contest ? i did Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
girty1600 Posted July 15, 2005 #3 Share Posted July 15, 2005 Very nice ED! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mr Ed Posted July 15, 2005 Author #4 Share Posted July 15, 2005 I haven't entered these babies into any competitions because I don't want to show off. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Daughter of the Nine Moons Posted July 15, 2005 #5 Share Posted July 15, 2005 Pie Oh how I weep, Chicken and Asparagus do not go, yet they are mixed together and sold! Where are thou Chicken and Asparagus? Why is there no chicken pie solo? Very cool poems. I like pie the best Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
snuffypuffer Posted July 15, 2005 #6 Share Posted July 15, 2005 Ode to Ben/nick fury He may not be great, at times he is simple. He is not a good man, but he is a man. This is his ode, may his name be forgotten. I do dig this, I do. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
nick_fury Posted July 15, 2005 #7 Share Posted July 15, 2005 Oh Ed, you have once again touched me in that special place....the heart Today is a great day to be nick fury indeed. I owe you a debt of gratitude my faithful companion, and one that cannot be paid back by any material goods....only by the purchase of matching bracelets Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mr Ed Posted July 15, 2005 Author #8 Share Posted July 15, 2005 (edited) My New Poem. When the wind blows, I don't care. When the sea horn sounds, I don't care. When my mother cries, I don't care. When I cut too deep, I don't care. When I am diseased, I don't care. If I die, please care. I am so alone, such darkness. Help kind stranger help. This teenager angst is renewed, but I don't care. Help me. When I die, remember to care. Care, remember to care. When I have no hair, remember to care. This is the end, cherish my life. Remember my hair. Edited July 15, 2005 by Mr Ed Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mr Ed Posted July 15, 2005 Author #9 Share Posted July 15, 2005 (edited) Man, if I keep on churning out this gold I will be rich. I already have publicisists on the phone. Thanks for your support guys, I will remember you when I am famous and pretentious. I will send you a meat basket. Edited July 15, 2005 by Mr Ed Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mr Ed Posted July 16, 2005 Author #10 Share Posted July 16, 2005 Triple posting (I know I am so crazy): The reason I have not used edit is because I wish to make it clear to everyone that these poems are jokes. Now, I know someone will probably say 'oh really?!? My god what a suprise!!!!', but there are a few people out there who really thought I meant I cut myself. I just want to assure you all that I don't. Criticisers, you know there are people who would take these literally. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Murdison Posted July 16, 2005 #11 Share Posted July 16, 2005 My New Poem. When the wind blows, I don't care. When the sea horn sounds, I don't care. When my mother cries, I don't care. When I cut too deep, I don't care. When I am diseased, I don't care. If I die, please care. I am so alone, such darkness. Help kind stranger help. This teenager angst is renewed, but I don't care. Help me. When I die, remember to care. Care, remember to care. When I have no hair, remember to care. This is the end, cherish my life. Remember my hair. 735312[/snapback] Thats a Chas'n'Dave rip off..! lol Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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