AdealJustice Posted January 27, 2012 #1 Share Posted January 27, 2012 Hey! I have been writing for a while but now i am starting to make some music, i am a beginner still but practice a lot everyday. check out my channel, my lyrics are meant to get people thinking, some people might not agree with some topics but kep an open mind and constructive critism will be helpful!!, thanks http://www.youtube.com/user/Adealist/videos Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AdealJustice Posted February 16, 2012 Author #2 Share Posted February 16, 2012 Hi everyone!, i write lyrics for hip hop / poetry and have been doing so far almost 2 years now. I am starting to record hip hop aswell but for now i will post my lyrics which can also be found on the UM blog and links are in my signature. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AdealJustice Posted February 16, 2012 Author #3 Share Posted February 16, 2012 I havent named my lyrics yet but these are the verse ones of many to come. comments would help me! thnx i witness my life move through new experiences meeting many people, many different appearances every moment flashing by, then i realize im laying in my death bed my heads on a pillow but my mind doesn't rest, i reassure myself, "i tried my best", trying to top the test, wasted my life trying to impress but now i can't stress enough, live your life according to your wishes no one is your master and the quicker we accept this we can progress nowa days we are quickily regressing, the rich are oppressing stop stressing , start professing your thoughts, remember what people want, in the future they’ll be saying truth n equality, reasons they fought Names Adeal, i spit for real ain't tryna conceal as i reveal lyrics are surreal forever, the name used to be a source of jokes but i destroyed the hoax , now folks listen to my vision opening minds from the prison, ain't tryna to be a politician but my mission is to start a revolution, end the pollution destruction of our planet, fix our society snatch it outa the devils sole proprietary, Jesus aint the saviour its our whole humanity, im only a messenger, so don't come crying to me i see the potentiality in humanity, every individual with the same capacity although we use it differently, we all sound gifted to me as long as we do what we enjoy without trying to destroy were being played like puppets and toys, the real hand is invisible the symbol is the one eye, banking, government n media are pieces of the same pie, grasp the moment it time flies by Used to live life watching it go by Never used take part but I realized why So now I try, but Tryna take take my piece of the pie Without takin another's, and cause I recognize were all brothers I spit about the struggle, and bombs exploding people covered in rubble This is my lyrical rebuttal, to the elites, while they planning Hurdles infront of our path, but my words are the gas, Like the **** they invented and used in the camps Killing people every second elapsed, honesty harassed But I ain't quitting till their structure has collapsed So relax, still, I read and understand, ignore the disinformation open your eyes to the realization, **** false self glorification As my lyrics are part of the restoration, the true explanation Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
d e v i c e Posted February 17, 2012 #4 Share Posted February 17, 2012 Believe me, it's great. 'Conscious' for sure. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AdealJustice Posted February 17, 2012 Author #5 Share Posted February 17, 2012 thank you, these are unrefined. Means a lot Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
orangepeaceful79 Posted February 19, 2012 #6 Share Posted February 19, 2012 thank you, these are unrefined. Means a lot Nice work. I like what you are doing, keep it up. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AdealJustice Posted February 19, 2012 Author #7 Share Posted February 19, 2012 Nice work. I like what you are doing, keep it up. thank you , Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AdealJustice Posted February 25, 2012 Author #8 Share Posted February 25, 2012 imagine the abyss , lyrically the mainstream is **** then I reminisce, a few individuals who spit the poetic dialect, ahead of the time like biotech, against this corruption im insurrect leavin you perplexed as to how im so adamant, a hip hop activist exposing hypocritical philanthropists that are corruptin the cabinet, political puppets hidin what the problem is In this world I'm livin in, the place I be spittin in My lyrics are riveting, while most be spittin primitive My thoughts are limitless, no one can limit this Ill show you what your limit is, I'm the original You just the derritive , nowdays faker actin Like lyrcists need their permission slip , Picture this , Talkin about swag is ridiculous, hypocrites while the poor starvin , we livin materialist Democratic imperialists livin in deliriousness so i write the truth so we can experience it cause the news is meant to confuse your views humans are merely puppets, all of us meant to be use here is another verse by me, i will update the post. lemme know what you think Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AdealJustice Posted February 29, 2012 Author #9 Share Posted February 29, 2012 imagine the abyss , lyrically the mainstream is **** then I reminisce, a few individuals who spit the poetic dialect, ahead of the time like biotech, against this corruption im insurrect leavin you perplexed as to how im so adamant, a hip hop activist exposing hypocritical philanthropists that are corruptin the cabinet, political puppets hidin what the problem is In this world I'm livin in, the place I be spittin in My lyrics are riveting, while most be spittin primitive My thoughts are limitless, no one can limit this Ill show you what your limit is, I'm the original You just the derritive , nowdays faker actin Like lyrcists need their permission slip , Picture this , Talkin about swag is ridiculous, hypocrites while the poor starvin , we livin materialist Democratic imperialists livin in deliriousness so i write the truth so we can experience it cause the news is meant to confuse your views humans are merely puppets, all of us meant to be use here is another verse by me, i will update the post. lemme know what you think bump false miracles distractin us, i call it miraculous they say it was immaculate, scientifically inaccurate spreadin ignorance, superstition, corrupting the true rendition just some quick thoughts Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AdealJustice Posted March 2, 2012 Author #10 Share Posted March 2, 2012 to think there isn't a prison of inhibition detrimental societal relations, negative vibrations i dont need to spell it out in abbreviation , so i use lyrical imagination cause i don't need recognition to prove my political position ill take the peoples position, in every rendition, image or history it will never remain a mystery as to what happened or will happen, avoidin the distractions, discretely extractin the important information, no hesitation for the truth exposition Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AdealJustice Posted March 13, 2012 Author #11 Share Posted March 13, 2012 its my time to spit metaphors , as if my musics opening the doors while you closing the gates, singing pretty tunes, tryna wheel em all in but theres an ending to everything, fact is there is little comprehending anything these days most get paid to distract your brains, its seems as if most have given in feel yourself privileged to hear me spit, light shining bright in the darkness, discover my word's as the source of it, every day im living the world im exploring it, but im distraught to see others destroying it i don't give a **** if your title is highness, i'd never sell out, i'd decline it cause they own they industry, they define it, i spit reality, forever defying when the days comes for judgement, what'll you say , on whom were you relying? no need for fake swagger, they the industries prostitutes , so stay away from the blue pill, to learn what really constitutes your existence, you are limited by their permissions, but no matter what happens, ill find the answer like division through my vision, reading inscriptions so yall can listen in blind, deaf and dumb actin as if the elites are permissive hunger can be ended would they allow to permit it Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wordless Wanderer Posted March 13, 2012 #12 Share Posted March 13, 2012 Pretty nice. Keep'em coming. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AdealJustice Posted March 13, 2012 Author #13 Share Posted March 13, 2012 Pretty nice. Keep'em coming. thank -you ! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AdealJustice Posted March 15, 2012 Author #14 Share Posted March 15, 2012 (edited) wrote this last night, tributed to Nas ... lyrcally im untouchable, can't front me im unfrontable call me trouble cause i spit the truth, the forbidden fruit shrewd but im real cause i know what yall feel but you might not say it, delay it but i spray it like a mac 11, **** reverends, i spit benevolent a wide vocabulary, probably, tough to come by, tried enough, i spit reality, cause vanity ain't worth it so i curse it, **** actin thug, i pull the plug, i call it repulsive money, i could give a **** i give a shrug * , record labels blood sucking shrubs, no happy ending like rub and tugs i spit like Plato, Aristotle, any battle, any hastle i break the shackles, every moment, fiends hindin like jackals lets be practical, intellectuals rarely exist, but i persist swear, i insist, this insant , every existence, poetic genius, sayin they hate me cause im nuclear, Iranian Surroundin them, like a saracen attack, destructive Like the war in Iraq, back track to see where the fund are at i dunk but yall shoot three pointers like Shaq yet you have the audacity to ask what i lack Edited March 15, 2012 by seller2006 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wordless Wanderer Posted March 15, 2012 #15 Share Posted March 15, 2012 oh nice! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AdealJustice Posted March 15, 2012 Author #16 Share Posted March 15, 2012 thank yu:), feed back appreciated, at least you take the time to! , means a lot Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AdealJustice Posted March 21, 2012 Author #17 Share Posted March 21, 2012 Lyrcally im untouchable, can't front me im unfrontable call me trouble cause i spit the truth, the forbidden fruit shrewd but im real cause i know what yall feel but you might not say it, delay it but i spray it like a mac 11, **** reverends, i spit benevolent a wide vocabulary, probably, tough to come by, tried enough, i spit reality, cause vanity ain't worth it so i curse it, **** actin thug, i pull the plug, i call it repulsive money, i could give a **** i give a shrug **** giving a **** , record labels blood sucking shrubs, no happy ending like rub and tugs i spit like Plato, Aristotle, any battle, any hastle i break the shackles, every moment, fiends hindin like jackals lets be practical, intellectuals rarely exist, but i persist swear, i insist, this insant , every existence, poetic genius, sayin they hate me cause im nuclear, Iranian Surroundin them, like a saracen attack, destructive Like the war in Iraq, back track to see where the fund are at i dunk but yall shoot three pointers like Shaq yet you have the audacity to ask what i lack "they don't know who we be", we try to see the inherent hypocrisy, psychology hurtin me but i created a barrier, i call it my mind, one of a kind you'll learn in due time, why im always in my lyrical prime cause if genocide is the answer, than ill never stay in line one can never justify violent crimes, i know my end its the same as yours, but i picked my path, can you choose yours, the world meant to be explored many people made to endure, the worst of the worst the type of things, make you wish you were in a hearse Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AdealJustice Posted March 26, 2012 Author #18 Share Posted March 26, 2012 Saw in my dream I was talking to Yeshua, he was eatin reeces pieces then he asked me sarcastically, " Jesus" when will this corruption leave us. sayin look at this planet, even the religious are Heathen most don't understand the purpose of their breathin the politicians , simply actors who were paid rehearse like a televangelist preaching about the church, the truth is never heard, but im always alert Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
sarah_444 Posted March 26, 2012 #19 Share Posted March 26, 2012 Saw in my dream I was talking to Yeshua, he was eatin reeces pieces then he asked me sarcastically, " Jesus" when will this corruption leave us. sayin look at this planet, even the religious are Heathen most don't understand the purpose of their breathin the politicians , simply actors who were paid rehearse like a televangelist preaching about the church, the truth is never heard, but im always alert I like that, it's really good. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AdealJustice Posted March 26, 2012 Author #20 Share Posted March 26, 2012 I like that, it's really good. thank - you! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AdealJustice Posted March 27, 2012 Author #21 Share Posted March 27, 2012 these are some of the tracks i will be recording to very soon Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AdealJustice Posted March 29, 2012 Author #22 Share Posted March 29, 2012 http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=jW2x20d5rUU just made this, let me know what you think Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tmars78 Posted March 30, 2012 #23 Share Posted March 30, 2012 I feel your lyrics and the direction you are trying to go. I have some constructive criticism if you don't mind. You need to find beats that go with your lyrics a little better. You're not really riding the beat too well. Get what I am trying to say? It's like the words don't mesh with beats. That's my brother....see how his lyrics flow right along with the music? I think you should work on finding beats that are more suited to your lyrics. Other than that man, keep up the good work!! I can always appreciate someone else doing their thing. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AdealJustice Posted March 30, 2012 Author #24 Share Posted March 30, 2012 I feel your lyrics and the direction you are trying to go. I have some constructive criticism if you don't mind. You need to find beats that go with your lyrics a little better. You're not really riding the beat too well. Get what I am trying to say? It's like the words don't mesh with beats. That's my brother....see how his lyrics flow right along with the music? I think you should work on finding beats that are more suited to your lyrics. Other than that man, keep up the good work!! I can always appreciate someone else doing their thing. I know what you mean, thanks for the advice. That is rough, quickily made in 15 mins xD. I will be recording i a studio soon. I also have a cold xD unfortunately. But ya i know what you mean, i wasnt feeling it , just kinda did it if you know what i mean xD. but soon this and others will be remade in a studio and ill repost. Your bro is a good rapper too. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tmars78 Posted March 30, 2012 #25 Share Posted March 30, 2012 I know what you mean, thanks for the advice. That is rough, quickily made in 15 mins xD. I will be recording i a studio soon. I also have a cold xD unfortunately. But ya i know what you mean, i wasnt feeling it , just kinda did it if you know what i mean xD. but soon this and others will be remade in a studio and ill repost. Your bro is a good rapper too. Thanks, it is something me and him just mess around and do in our free time(when we have it). And just keep at it man, Rome wasn't built in a day. Always nice to see someone doing something they love. Just don't let anyone tell you that you can't do it, or aren't any good. Looking forward to hearing more!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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