mad inventor Posted September 17, 2005 #1 Share Posted September 17, 2005 Through the mists of time see your face and i cry for all the lonely days that cloud my life with shades of grey,tell me love why did you walk away. The smell of summer air has gone,the birds have finished off there songs,my icey heart does not belong to the one i based my future on. so now i chose to walk alone among the shadows of a broken dream, an empty shell a forgotten kiss,why did things have to come to this. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yelekiah Posted September 17, 2005 #2 Share Posted September 17, 2005 an empty shell a forgotten kiss Finally, something good I can comment on. Poetry is your thing. Keep it up, the prose is beautiful. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mandy74 Posted September 17, 2005 #3 Share Posted September 17, 2005 :cry:That was sad but very beautiful, you definetly have a talent. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mad inventor Posted September 17, 2005 Author #4 Share Posted September 17, 2005 just wanted to say thank you to the replies, its nice to get some feedback now and then. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
nativechick1989 Posted September 18, 2005 #5 Share Posted September 18, 2005 Wow . . . that's deep! Great poem, mad inventor! I agree with the others, you definitely have a talent for poetry. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
cloud_dancer Posted September 19, 2005 #6 Share Posted September 19, 2005 thats an excellent poem mad inventor Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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