scorpiosonic Posted February 27, 2014 #1 Share Posted February 27, 2014 (edited) This Lonely World Only soaring birds went there, daring pouring rain and sounds of wind. Where powerful storms sent by warm oceans drove careless waves to pound the shores of this lonely world, which formed gleaming whirlpools in coves of white sand and water. The wind mourned thru forbidden hills, into a hidden vista, shrouded in mist, and surrounded by mystery. When the sun broke free of the cloud's gloom and then streamed past the flowers, twisting vines, and steaming palms, it cast shadows on the vast seas of flora beyond. Stirred, the towering trees bent their heads before the breeze, that spread the scents of blooms galore. As the doomed sun squeezed the last drops from the day, nite loomed, and the fog rolled in fast again and brought more rain that fell like tears in this lonely world. Copyright Scorpiosonic Edited March 4, 2014 by Still Waters Copyright added at OP's request 3 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Arcana Posted February 27, 2014 #2 Share Posted February 27, 2014 You have succeeded in painting a vivid and beautiful picture in the mind's eye with this one Scorp, I love it!!! Very well written indeed my friend. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Still Waters Posted February 28, 2014 #3 Share Posted February 28, 2014 I like this too, very nice. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
scorpiosonic Posted March 1, 2014 Author #4 Share Posted March 1, 2014 Thank you both. 2 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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