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#1    PsychicPenguin

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Posted 19 December 2003 - 03:38 AM

Just to keep everything in order, put your comments and ideas here instead of original thread.

Should El Chupacabra be involved in this story? tongue.gif


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Posted 19 December 2003 - 03:46 AM

moe is a bit slow today. drugged up on nyquil: probably the reason for my strange postings.  tongue.gif
  Uh ....blah....yeah. Ill be on the story later tonight once da kids are sleepin and i get some free time.
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Posted 19 December 2003 - 04:02 AM

OK... it looks like there is a confusion between characters Jade and Jasmine

Character list:
1. Jade - "the chosen one", a young girl prophecized to be a warrior. She has nightmares that may be caused by a curse. She doesn't have any family left.

2. Jasmine - Jade's best friend. She is somehow involved in Jade's curse. The prophecy said that she is going to die.

3. Aunt Cessie - Somebody who told the girls about the curse. It is unknown how she found out about it.

4. Draclula - A vampire who believes in the prophecy and protects Jade, but his real intention is unknown.

5. "the beast" - unknown character. enemy of the vampires. Jade was attacked once, but she was saved by Draclula.

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send a blank message with <writing> as you type. That way you won't get anybody to send something ahead of you. The edit your blank message and put your addition to the story.


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Posted 19 December 2003 - 04:07 AM

  i was wonmdering about that myself..i was thinking " what happened to my Jade?"

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Posted 19 December 2003 - 06:16 AM

Good idea Penguin

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Posted 19 December 2003 - 06:36 AM

my mind is full of them, don't stop on me now  tongue.gif  laugh.gif

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Posted 19 December 2003 - 07:29 AM

Ooops....I posted a comment before I read the rest of the threads   sad.gif  oh well, I still love this "writing" thread.  I haven't written creatively in years, and it feels great to start up again.

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Posted 19 December 2003 - 09:07 AM

Why do there allways have to be Vampires , I don't mean to be picky but allways Vampires . I remember when Bea Arthur was the anti hero in our stories . I miss Bea  sad.gif  


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Posted 19 December 2003 - 11:51 AM

Don't worry abt it soulfire, just glad to have you join us  grin2.gif

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Posted 19 December 2003 - 02:02 PM

    And actually it is supposed to be Draclula, not Dracula. Slight but a little bit of difference. And as for why is in the story? Well I just thought him up as a minor character but he's seemed to take on a life of his own.

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Posted 19 December 2003 - 02:40 PM

Fixed my spelling for Draclula tongue.gif

Well, vampires are cool. But we can always put El Chupacabra in if you want to grin2.gif


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Posted 19 December 2003 - 02:43 PM

I like vampires, as for that other thing  ph34r.gif lol

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Posted 19 December 2003 - 03:08 PM

human human or vampire human Penguin?

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Posted 19 December 2003 - 03:10 PM

Human human, just to add the confusion. Let's see how are you going to resolve that tongue.gif


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Posted 20 December 2003 - 12:05 AM

   Well the chup is rather like a wolf like beast, at least supposedly. So grow him about 4 times and make him our beast.  thumbsup.gif  Then every one can be happy. Whats your thought on that psypenguin?

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