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#1    Shayla_Ayn

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Posted 15 March 2009 - 07:26 PM

Hello. I posted a topic on Vampires and Nazi's a while back and I'm working on the third rewrite now. I sent out the books to a few of my family and friends but I need some unbiased people to edit it as well. So, I was wondering if anyone would be willing to help edit, I need like 3 people.

It's really short right now, like 34 pages (crappy)... I'm mostly looking for way to make it longer.

Thanks.


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Posted 16 March 2009 - 10:51 AM

PM me a link to it - I'll read it.

I'm not a professional editor or proof-reader or owt like that, obviously, but I could give my opinions of it?

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Posted 16 March 2009 - 11:30 AM

Shayla_Ayn on Mar 15 2009, 07:26 PM, said:

Hello. I posted a topic on Vampires and Nazi's a while back and I'm working on the third rewrite now. I sent out the books to a few of my family and friends but I need some unbiased people to edit it as well. So, I was wondering if anyone would be willing to help edit, I need like 3 people.

It's really short right now, like 34 pages (crappy)... I'm mostly looking for way to make it longer.

Thanks.


I can proof read it if you like, it's something I used to do for a living though I don't have loads of spare time so you might want someone else to help.

I'm happy to do it if you like though, just let me know.


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Posted 16 March 2009 - 03:08 PM

schizoidwoman on Mar 16 2009, 11:30 AM, said:

I can proof read it if you like, it's something I used to do for a living though I don't have loads of spare time so you might want someone else to help.

I'm happy to do it if you like though, just let me know.


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Posted 16 March 2009 - 05:52 PM

I ma also willing to help...Though it exceeds I belive more people on a singlke work can bring good effets
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