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#1 User is offline   nowonmai 


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Posted 05 November 2009 - 02:37 AM

Twilight
the sweet tide of night
dark wings in flight on a wave of ebb light
In a sky of animation
the stars begin to hasten
to show their faces to the night
and with mingled trepidation
they sparkle in elation
to see their brothers, their poor relations
shining back from neon heights
sparkling cities of lights

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Posted 05 November 2009 - 05:10 AM

It must be lonely as a star.Posted Image
Beautiful poem.

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Posted 05 November 2009 - 11:32 AM

Very magical the moment of transition and it is captured well.
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Posted 05 November 2009 - 12:48 PM

Very nice poem nowonmai.....welcome to UM :)
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