[Mistydawn]

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A soul cries out in the dark
A wish that was a spark
Dies in the embers of the heart

Floundering on the masses of hate
Stretching forth a hand for want of a mate
Too late

Sharp and clear acid rains fall on earths dry dusty soil
And there within the pit the soul drowns in oil
The oil of human excrement and toil

Above in galaxies of burning stars
Great Ships scuttle in astral breeze
Searching out other worlds
Where once again life embryos will submit and fold
To lie In cavernous pits of cold.

Wars rage on, on the astral plane
But on Earth the rot are rotten to behold
And all is still, as nothing could be gained, and nothing did they gain.

[Hissie Sola]

A depressing theme, but well described and very true.

[Mistydawn]

Hissie Sola, on 07 November 2009 - 11:10 AM, said:

A depressing theme, but well described and very true.

Thanks Hissie.

[Tastymuffin]

No way will those ships go by and leave you behind, or him. Just hang on, its too soon. XXX

[vortex-goliath]

okay, so dont open your door or answer your phone. We have our ways, our means. We got your back, whether you like it or not! You aren't goin nowhere okay?! right!!!

[Mistydawn]

Tastymuffin, on 07 November 2009 - 02:51 PM, said:

No way will those ships go by and leave you behind, or him. Just hang on, its too soon. XXX

Its okay Tasty, everything is fine. You be careful who you mix with. hugs

[Mistydawn]

vortex-goliath, on 07 November 2009 - 03:58 PM, said:

okay, so dont open your door or answer your phone. We have our ways, our means. We got your back, whether you like it or not! You aren't goin nowhere okay?! right!!!

Jeez, you are indeflatable! (hope that is an actual word) Sometimes, even friends need to back away a wee bit... but not too far! Thank you Vorty. hugsx

[Rosewin]

I can see the war out there in this world, one we might never win, but also the war within, I think we have a chance at that one. I also get a very cold feeling of things are as they are, even as we die here, out there germs and bacteria or whatever it is that flies in space is finding a nice place in the Universe to land and grow and evolve....so we can do it all over again.

[Cloudshill]

It seems to be a stark vison of reality, both universal and personal. Dark but well expressed.

[schizoidwoman]

Very well written and an exploration of such dark themes; good stuff.

[Voyager10]

It is a sad poem but it is powerfully written, nice work Misty

[Mistydawn]

Rosewin, on 08 November 2009 - 06:47 AM, said:

I can see the war out there in this world, one we might never win, but also the war within, I think we have a chance at that one. I also get a very cold feeling of things are as they are, even as we die here, out there germs and bacteria or whatever it is that flies in space is finding a nice place in the Universe to land and grow and evolve....so we can do it all over again.

Rosewin, such faith and honesty, stoic, that is how I would describe you. Thank you for not just reading, but giving your definition.

[Mistydawn]

Cloudshill, on 08 November 2009 - 01:45 PM, said:

It seems to be a stark vison of reality, both universal and personal. Dark but well expressed.

Stark! That is me in full clarity! Thank you Cloudshill, you know all your opinions are valued with intensity.

[Mistydawn]

schizoidwoman, on 09 November 2009 - 03:57 AM, said:

Very well written and an exploration of such dark themes; good stuff.

Thank you for commenting Schizy, how are you girl? Still climbing that hill in Yorkshire??...lucky lucky you!

[Mistydawn]

Voyager10, on 09 November 2009 - 02:32 PM, said:

It is a sad poem but it is powerfully written, nice work Misty

Voyager10, you have a heart made of pure gold. Thank you so much, even though it is a c*rap poem!!