Alewyn, on 09 February 2012 - 07:39 PM, said:
Thanks Abe. I realy appreciate your approval.
You're welcome, Alewyn.
I know, I once assumed that English was your first language, and that then you replied by telling me that you had to 'rack your brains' while trying to come up with some translation into English.
Well, from all the translations of that one sentence, by Puzz, Otharus, and me, I think yours is the most poetic AND respectful (and that must have been the intention of the line).
It has this smooth, intelligent and sensitive.. uhm.. flavor (?) that I like most in poems.
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EDIT:
I will tell you something else...
In high school we studied Dutch poetry, and also poetry from our socalled 'colonies'.
So, one day we were discussing poetry from the Dutch Antilles, and our teacher handed out booklets.
Of course that teacher expected to get back all the booklets he had handed out, because he knew no one would be that interested to be willing to steal it.
Heh, well, afterwards he collected the booklets, and then he missed only one...
OK, after something resembling a police interrogation, I admiited, red face and all, that I had stolen the booklet.
But he didn't respond as I expected... he said, "never in my dreams I would have imagined one of my pupils to steal poetry".
And that was it.
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Edited by Abramelin, 09 February 2012 - 07:59 PM.