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[seller2006]

Hey! I have been writing for a while but now i am starting to make some music, i am a beginner still but practice a lot everyday. check out my channel, my lyrics are meant to get people thinking, some people might not agree with some topics but kep an open mind and constructive critism will be helpful!!, thanks http://www.youtube.c...Adealist/videos

[seller2006]

Hi everyone!, i write lyrics for hip hop / poetry and have been doing so far almost 2 years now. I am starting to record hip hop aswell but for now i will post my lyrics which can also be found on the UM blog and links are in my signature.

[seller2006]

I havent named my lyrics yet but these are the verse ones of many to come. comments would help me! thnx

i witness my life move through new experiences
meeting many people, many different appearances
every moment flashing by, then i realize im laying in my death bed
my heads on a pillow but my mind doesn't rest, i reassure myself,
"i tried my best", trying to top the test, wasted my life trying to impress
but now i can't stress enough, live your life according to your wishes
no one is your master and the quicker we accept this we can progress
nowa days we are quickily regressing, the rich are oppressing
stop stressing , start professing your thoughts,
remember what people want, in the future
they’ll be saying truth n equality, reasons they fought

Names Adeal, i spit for real ain't tryna conceal as i reveal
lyrics are surreal forever, the name used to be a source of jokes
but i destroyed the hoax , now folks listen to my vision
opening minds from the prison, ain't tryna to be a politician
but my mission is to start a revolution, end the pollution
destruction of our planet, fix our society
snatch it outa the devils sole proprietary, Jesus aint the saviour
its our whole humanity, im only a messenger, so don't come crying to me
i see the potentiality in humanity, every individual with the same capacity
although we use it differently, we all sound gifted to me
as long as we do what we enjoy without trying to destroy
were being played like puppets and toys, the real hand is invisible
the symbol is the one eye,  banking, government n media
are pieces of the same pie, grasp the moment it time flies by

Used to live life watching it go by
Never used take part but I realized why
So now I try, but Tryna take take my piece of the pie
Without takin another's, and cause I recognize were all brothers
I spit about the struggle, and bombs exploding people covered in rubble
This is my lyrical rebuttal, to the elites, while they planning
Hurdles infront of our path, but my words are the gas,
Like the **** they invented and used in the camps
Killing people every second elapsed, honesty harassed
But I ain't quitting till their structure has collapsed
So relax, still, I read and understand, ignore the disinformation
open your eyes to the realization, **** false self glorification
As my lyrics are part of the restoration, the true explanation

[Device]

Believe me, it's great. 'Conscious' for sure.

[seller2006]

thank you, these are unrefined. Means a lot

[orangepeaceful79]

seller2006, on 17 February 2012 - 07:19 AM, said:

thank you, these are unrefined. Means a lot

Nice work.  I like what you are doing, keep it up.

[seller2006]

orangepeaceful79, on 19 February 2012 - 12:14 AM, said:

Nice work.  I like what you are doing, keep it up.

thank you ,

[seller2006]

imagine the abyss , lyrically the mainstream is ****
then I reminisce, a few individuals who spit the poetic dialect,
ahead of the time like biotech,
against this corruption im insurrect
leavin you perplexed as to how im so adamant, a hip hop activist
exposing hypocritical philanthropists that are corruptin the cabinet,
political puppets hidin what the problem is
In this world I'm livin in, the place I be spittin in
My lyrics are riveting, while most be spittin primitive
My thoughts are limitless, no one can limit this
Ill show you what your limit is, I'm the original
You just the derritive , nowdays faker actin
Like lyrcists need their permission slip , Picture this ,
Talkin about swag is ridiculous, hypocrites
while the poor starvin , we livin materialist
Democratic imperialists livin in deliriousness
so i write the truth so we can experience it
cause the news is meant to confuse your views
humans are merely puppets, all of us meant to be use

here is another verse by me, i will update the post. lemme know what you think

[seller2006]

seller2006, on 25 February 2012 - 08:25 PM, said:

imagine the abyss , lyrically the mainstream is ****
then I reminisce, a few individuals who spit the poetic dialect,
ahead of the time like biotech,
against this corruption im insurrect
leavin you perplexed as to how im so adamant, a hip hop activist
exposing hypocritical philanthropists that are corruptin the cabinet,
political puppets hidin what the problem is
In this world I'm livin in, the place I be spittin in
My lyrics are riveting, while most be spittin primitive
My thoughts are limitless, no one can limit this
Ill show you what your limit is, I'm the original
You just the derritive , nowdays faker actin
Like lyrcists need their permission slip , Picture this ,
Talkin about swag is ridiculous, hypocrites
while the poor starvin , we livin materialist
Democratic imperialists livin in deliriousness
so i write the truth so we can experience it
cause the news is meant to confuse your views
humans are merely puppets, all of us meant to be use

here is another verse by me, i will update the post. lemme know what you think

bump


false miracles distractin us, i call it miraculous
they say it was immaculate, scientifically inaccurate
spreadin ignorance, superstition, corrupting the true rendition


just some quick thoughts

[seller2006]

to think there isn't a prison of inhibition
detrimental societal relations, negative vibrations
i dont need to spell it out in abbreviation , so i use lyrical imagination
cause i don't need recognition to prove my political position
ill take the peoples position, in every rendition, image or history
it will never remain a mystery as to what happened
or will happen, avoidin the distractions, discretely extractin
the important information, no hesitation for the truth exposition

[seller2006]

its my time to spit metaphors , as if my musics opening the doors
while you closing the gates, singing pretty tunes, tryna wheel em all in
but theres an ending to everything, fact is there is little comprehending anything
these days most get paid to distract your brains, its seems as if most have given in
feel yourself privileged to hear me spit, light shining bright in the darkness,
discover my word's as the source of it, every day im living
the world im exploring it, but im distraught to see others destroying it
i don't give a **** if your title is highness, i'd never sell out, i'd decline it
cause they own they industry, they define it, i spit reality, forever defying
when the days comes for judgement, what'll you say , on whom were you relying?
no need for fake swagger, they the industries prostitutes ,
so stay away from the blue pill, to learn what really constitutes
your existence, you are limited by their permissions,
but no matter what happens, ill find the answer like division
through my vision, reading inscriptions so yall can listen in
blind, deaf and dumb actin as if the elites are permissive
hunger can be ended would they allow to permit it

[Wordless Wanderer]

Pretty nice. Keep'em coming.

[seller2006]

Wordless Wanderer, on 13 March 2012 - 07:41 AM, said:

Pretty nice. Keep'em coming.

thank -you !

[seller2006]

wrote this last night, tributed to Nas ...


lyrcally im untouchable, can't front me im unfrontable
call me trouble cause i spit the truth, the forbidden fruit
shrewd but im real cause i know what yall feel
but you might not say it, delay it but i spray it
like a mac 11, **** reverends, i spit benevolent
a wide vocabulary, probably, tough to come by,
tried enough, i spit reality, cause vanity ain't worth it
so i curse it, **** actin thug, i pull the plug, i call it repulsive
money, i could give a **** i give a shrug * , record labels
blood sucking shrubs, no happy ending like rub and tugs

i spit like Plato, Aristotle, any battle, any hastle
i break the shackles, every moment, fiends hindin like jackals
lets be practical, intellectuals rarely exist, but i persist
swear, i insist, this insant , every existence, poetic
genius, sayin they hate me cause im nuclear, Iranian
Surroundin them, like a saracen attack, destructive
Like the war in Iraq, back track to see where the fund are at
i dunk but yall shoot three pointers like Shaq
yet you have the audacity to ask what i lack

Edited by seller2006, 15 March 2012 - 11:04 PM.

[Wordless Wanderer]

oh nice!