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[Archived] {un}holy haiku (Part 2)


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#1216    with bells on

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Posted 16 November 2012 - 05:44 AM

one poem too far
two kids stuck on happy days
three birds in one hand


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Posted 16 November 2012 - 09:44 AM

three birds in one hand
to punish or peace or power
pray four best one


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Posted 16 November 2012 - 01:57 PM

pray four best one, eh?
five seven five is the key
to haiku success


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Posted 16 November 2012 - 02:47 PM

to haiku success
warm my heart or make me smile
that is all I want

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Posted 16 November 2012 - 07:36 PM

that is all I want
for =Jak= to follow the rule
or explain why not

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#1221    Helen of Annoy

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Posted 16 November 2012 - 10:23 PM

or explain why not
since I’ve come this far could I
rest my troubled soul

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Posted 16 November 2012 - 11:21 PM

rest my troubled soul
rose petal pillow soothing
smoothing away thought

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Posted 17 November 2012 - 10:41 AM

smoothing away thought
breaking through the mind control
i can see rainbows


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Posted 17 November 2012 - 02:05 PM

I can see rainbows
or maybe its just the dirt
that smears my windshield


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Posted 17 November 2012 - 03:22 PM

that smears my windshield
so much that I cannot see
no driving while blind

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now i know that light is old and stars are cold

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Posted 17 November 2012 - 03:33 PM

No driving while blind!
seems like a rule intended
to be challenged


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Posted 17 November 2012 - 04:53 PM

to be challenged
with lost pieces of your mind
to bridge space and time

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Posted 17 November 2012 - 05:01 PM

to bridge space and time
sounds like fluffy woo-woo talk
to live is to die


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Posted 17 November 2012 - 05:19 PM

to live is to die
and have good stories to tell
those waiting for you

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Posted 17 November 2012 - 08:39 PM

those waiting for you
are getting restless and may
materialize

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