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Posted 22 November 2012 - 08:57 PM

i can hear it now
kisses singing in the night
thank you for your love

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Posted 22 November 2012 - 10:07 PM

thank you for your love
ever burning, spotless sun
or quite close to that
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Posted 23 November 2012 - 02:24 AM

or quite close to that
the radiance of the heart
glistening on snow
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now i know that light is old and stars are cold

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Posted 23 November 2012 - 02:32 AM

glistening on snow
the crying light of one dove
a fistful of love

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Posted 23 November 2012 - 02:42 AM

a fistful of love
is really no match for a
fistful of dollars
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Posted 23 November 2012 - 02:59 AM

a fistful of dollars
on the money tree of life
i need a dollar

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Posted 23 November 2012 - 03:02 AM

fistful of dollars
we talking loonies or bills?
change can get heavy...


("Loonie" is the name of our Canadian dollar coin for those who didn't know) :P

I need a dollar
Want to get home before dawn
Can you spare some change?

Edited by sarah_444, 23 November 2012 - 03:04 AM.


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Posted 23 November 2012 - 03:05 AM

change can get heavy
as good as a holiday
be the change you want

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Posted 23 November 2012 - 03:16 AM

Be the change you want
Take Responsibility
The world is waiting



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Posted 23 November 2012 - 03:20 AM

The world is waiting
But it won't wait forever
Do not hesitate
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Posted 23 November 2012 - 04:00 AM

do not hesitate
one, two, buckle my shoe, please
back to the future


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Posted 23 November 2012 - 06:31 AM

Back to the future
Fly so high, Marty Mcfly
With Hoverboard speed!

(okay..three edits later and its time for me to go to sleep)

Edited by sarah_444, 23 November 2012 - 06:36 AM.


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Posted 23 November 2012 - 08:29 AM

with hoverboard speed
its a bird, its a plane, its?
burn rubber mama

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Posted 23 November 2012 - 10:39 AM

burn rubber mama
peace of child no more
piece lies in bag
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Posted 23 November 2012 - 12:00 PM

View Post=Jak=, on 23 November 2012 - 10:39 AM, said:

burn rubber mama
peace of child no more
piece lies in bag

hey.. the first line needs to 5 syllables.. the 2nd 7, and the third 5..


a piece lies in bag
way out in the World Wide Web
a strange form of life




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