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{un}holy haiku (Part 2)


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#1666    Helen of Annoy

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Posted 14 December 2012 - 06:34 PM

aura expanding
fondling friendly energies
more than sum of parts

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#1667    Overdueleaf

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Posted 14 December 2012 - 11:16 PM

more than sum of parts
take notice to those that are
begging forgiveness

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Posted 15 December 2012 - 12:51 AM

Can someone explain the rules of Haiku?
There's no info on the first page of this thread.


#1669    ImaLoner

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Posted 15 December 2012 - 02:20 AM

Haiku.. 1st line 5 syllables, 2nd line 7 syllables, and 3rd line 5 syllables.  Here, we take the last line of the person above us and use it for our first line.  So, since Overdueleaf's last line was "begging forgiveness", I will continue with:

begging forgiveness
i did not make enough pies
it's a bake sale fail


#1670    Overdueleaf

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Posted 15 December 2012 - 02:29 AM

it's a bake sale fail
but what about the cookies
enough to go 'round

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#1671    Helen of Annoy

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Posted 15 December 2012 - 11:49 AM

enough to go ‘round
the more you give, more you get
perpetual bloom

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Posted 15 December 2012 - 12:04 PM

perpetual bloom
as helen fly on her broom
and with her came doom

by the name of Allah the Gracious the Merciful
Say, "I seek refuge in the Lord of daybreak From the evil of that which He created
And from the evil of darkness when it settles And from the evil of the blowers in knots
And from the evil of an envier when he envies"
truthful was Allah The Most High And Great


#1673    Helen of Annoy

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Posted 15 December 2012 - 12:15 PM

and with her came doom
lightning bolts ripped skies open
truth fell naked down

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Posted 15 December 2012 - 02:52 PM

truth fell naked down
making a naked truth pool
so naked, so true


#1675    Helen of Annoy

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Posted 15 December 2012 - 03:34 PM

so naked, so true
stand beeches in winter winds
taking blows for you

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Posted 15 December 2012 - 03:37 PM

taking blows for you
so we all avoid sucking
finding a way out


#1677    Helen of Annoy

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Posted 15 December 2012 - 03:48 PM

finding a way out
those who will never return
down the same ravine

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Posted 15 December 2012 - 03:51 PM

down the same ravine
over and over.... can't find
where i parked the car
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Posted 15 December 2012 - 04:12 PM

where i parked the car
is not a concern for you
find your own way home

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#1680    Helen of Annoy

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Posted 15 December 2012 - 04:21 PM

where I parked the car
grass will never grow again
but it grows on roof


Edit: yeah, was doing something else :D



find your own way home
I did my part with kicking
you out of picture

Edited by Helen of Annoy, 15 December 2012 - 04:22 PM.

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