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[Archived] {un}holy haiku (Part 2)


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#1801    ouija ouija

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Posted 21 December 2012 - 07:15 PM

juicy mess next door
orchard not harvested now
drunken birds revel

This ..... this is your life as it passed before other people's eyes.

italics don't really work in comic sans, do they? :/   

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Posted 21 December 2012 - 07:16 PM

juicy mess next door
she staggered home drunk again
should I let her in?


#1803    Helen of Annoy

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Posted 21 December 2012 - 07:58 PM

drunken birds revel
seeing vision of May queen  
should I let her in?

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#1804    ouija ouija

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Posted 21 December 2012 - 08:27 PM

Very neatly done!


should I let her in?
she is out of season now
and unused to cold

This ..... this is your life as it passed before other people's eyes.

italics don't really work in comic sans, do they? :/   

#1805    Overdueleaf

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Posted 21 December 2012 - 11:16 PM

and unused to cold
frozen wasteland stretches forth
unforgiving force

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#1806    ImaLoner

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Posted 22 December 2012 - 12:57 AM

unforgiving force
how sad to bind one's self to
eternal anguish


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Posted 22 December 2012 - 01:37 AM

eternal anguish
abandonment is torture
lonliness is here

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Posted 22 December 2012 - 04:06 AM

loneliness is here
so is avarice, joy and
her friend, awkwardness


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Posted 22 December 2012 - 04:10 AM

her friend, akwardness,
fragile gait and frail body
time will tell her pain

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Posted 22 December 2012 - 02:43 PM

time will tell her pain
hoping to forgive, forget
fresh new starts still hurt


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Posted 22 December 2012 - 03:05 PM

fresh new starts still hurt,
but they can set your heart free
your real life begins


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Posted 22 December 2012 - 04:04 PM

your real life begins
as the haze slowly gives way
it's been a rough start

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#1813    Helen of Annoy

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Posted 22 December 2012 - 04:51 PM

it’s been a rough start
let the worst happen first so
the rest feels better

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Posted 22 December 2012 - 06:04 PM

the rest feels better
pain, agony, is fleeting
happier times come

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#1815    Helen of Annoy

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Posted 22 December 2012 - 07:48 PM

happier times come
rock bottom is firm ground there’s
no way but upwards

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The will to live maybe, but not the plot...  -  Junior Chubb