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[Archived] {un}holy haiku (Part 2)


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#1906    Overdueleaf

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Posted 03 January 2013 - 03:02 AM

Echoes on inside
straining to hear faint cries that
come from underneath

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Posted 03 January 2013 - 03:09 AM

come from underneath
expose thyself to the world
breath the chemicals

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once i believed that starlight could guide me home
now i know that light is old and stars are cold

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Posted 03 January 2013 - 03:47 AM

breathe the chemicals
smell of something not right here
Hell is a strange place

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Posted 03 January 2013 - 03:52 AM

hell is a strange place
demons ride ashened brimstone
seething fire rains

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Posted 03 January 2013 - 04:33 AM

seething fire rains
as they learn to see through flames
turn to pray for rain

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Posted 03 January 2013 - 12:47 PM

turn to pray for rain
it seemed so long since last pour
it rained long and hard

"I think there may be "ghost phenomenon" that may be still not fully understood or dismissed, but that doesn't make it spirits of the dead, anymore than "UFO" means "spaceship" or even "UFO" or "spaceship" is directly related to aliens, or anything else. There is way too much assumption and a baseless reliance on anecdotal lore, like when people assert this or that about the spirit world or the astral plane or Ouija board demons, or religion. I say 'says WHO?'" - Paranormalcy

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Posted 03 January 2013 - 01:24 PM

it rained long and hard
the whole yard was a big lake
Venutian wet dream

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now i know that light is old and stars are cold

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Posted 03 January 2013 - 06:11 PM

Venutian wet dream
soundless gondola gliding  
over yesterday

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Posted 03 January 2013 - 06:49 PM

over yesterday
you may bear witness of time's
reversed symphony


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Posted 03 January 2013 - 07:01 PM

reversed symphony
of grenades now imploding  
taking shrapnel back

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Posted 03 January 2013 - 07:06 PM

reversed symphony
once light and happy, but now
it's morose and dark


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Posted 03 January 2013 - 07:18 PM

it’s morose and dark
just like me, don’t strike it through
shadow comes with light

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Posted 03 January 2013 - 11:00 PM

shadows come with light
misty areas between
lashes, eyes half shut


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Posted 04 January 2013 - 12:32 AM

lashes, eyes half shut
beckoning the dakness to
come engulf the madness

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Posted 04 January 2013 - 02:39 AM

come engulf the madness
as the coldness spreads throughout
jump into the fire

"I think there may be "ghost phenomenon" that may be still not fully understood or dismissed, but that doesn't make it spirits of the dead, anymore than "UFO" means "spaceship" or even "UFO" or "spaceship" is directly related to aliens, or anything else. There is way too much assumption and a baseless reliance on anecdotal lore, like when people assert this or that about the spirit world or the astral plane or Ouija board demons, or religion. I say 'says WHO?'" - Paranormalcy