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[Archived] {un}holy haiku (Part 2)


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#1906    Overdueleaf

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Posted 03 January 2013 - 03:02 AM

Echoes on inside
straining to hear faint cries that
come from underneath

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Your memory IS foggy. It's the pancakes

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Posted 03 January 2013 - 03:09 AM

come from underneath
expose thyself to the world
breath the chemicals

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once i believed that starlight could guide me home
now i know that light is old and stars are cold

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Posted 03 January 2013 - 03:47 AM

breathe the chemicals
smell of something not right here
Hell is a strange place

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Posted 03 January 2013 - 03:52 AM

hell is a strange place
demons ride ashened brimstone
seething fire rains

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Posted 03 January 2013 - 04:33 AM

seething fire rains
as they learn to see through flames
turn to pray for rain

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Posted 03 January 2013 - 12:47 PM

turn to pray for rain
it seemed so long since last pour
it rained long and hard

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Posted 03 January 2013 - 01:24 PM

it rained long and hard
the whole yard was a big lake
Venutian wet dream

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Posted 03 January 2013 - 06:11 PM

Venutian wet dream
soundless gondola gliding  
over yesterday

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Posted 03 January 2013 - 06:49 PM

over yesterday
you may bear witness of time's
reversed symphony


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Posted 03 January 2013 - 07:01 PM

reversed symphony
of grenades now imploding  
taking shrapnel back

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Posted 03 January 2013 - 07:06 PM

reversed symphony
once light and happy, but now
it's morose and dark


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Posted 03 January 2013 - 07:18 PM

it’s morose and dark
just like me, don’t strike it through
shadow comes with light

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Posted 03 January 2013 - 11:00 PM

shadows come with light
misty areas between
lashes, eyes half shut


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Posted 04 January 2013 - 12:32 AM

lashes, eyes half shut
beckoning the dakness to
come engulf the madness

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Posted 04 January 2013 - 02:39 AM

come engulf the madness
as the coldness spreads throughout
jump into the fire

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