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{un}holy haiku (Part 2)


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#1996    Overdueleaf

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Posted 09 January 2013 - 11:06 PM

if seas were not dry
shipwrecked bones would peek from the depths
of their fathomed graves
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Your memory IS foggy. It's the pancakes

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Posted 10 January 2013 - 03:43 PM

of thier fathomed graves
many sailors have felt dread
there is peace below

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Posted 10 January 2013 - 04:05 PM

Peace below without sorrow
Thinking about the moon
While my flower is blooming

Edited by Cataclysmic faith, 10 January 2013 - 04:08 PM.

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Posted 10 January 2013 - 04:20 PM

Hi Cataclysmic faith,  just an FYI, the last line in the previous post should be the first line in your haiku and we follow the pattern of 5 syllables, 7 syllables, 5 syllables.  Welcom to the thread!

flower is blooming
throwing it's scent to the wind
calling honey bees

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Posted 10 January 2013 - 05:35 PM

calling honey bees
not one of those pitcher plants
I stem from rich soil
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Posted 10 January 2013 - 05:41 PM

I stem from rich soil
mystic disease wakens us
zombies walk the earth

#2002    Helen of Annoy

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Posted 10 January 2013 - 05:48 PM

zombies walk the earth
slowly, like they have all day  
I don’t, do it quick
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Posted 10 January 2013 - 06:11 PM

I don't, do it quick
like they say, just in the nick
kink in the armour
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once i believed that starlight could guide me home
now i know that light is old and stars are cold

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Posted 10 January 2013 - 06:22 PM

kink in the armour
the marten went through hole where
bear got its ass stuck
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Posted 10 January 2013 - 10:47 PM

bear got it's ass stuck
Rabbit hung towels on legs
no more honey, Pooh!

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Posted 10 January 2013 - 11:37 PM

no more honey, Pooh!
Christopher Robin shouted
and Eeyor looked sad

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Posted 10 January 2013 - 11:47 PM

and Eyeore looked sad
The Hundred Acre Wood fears
donkey suicide

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Posted 11 January 2013 - 01:03 AM

donkey suicide
chicken coup, animal farm
devil in the yard
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Your memory IS foggy. It's the pancakes

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Posted 11 January 2013 - 03:26 AM

devil in the yard
in the form of a raven
watching the maiden

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Posted 11 January 2013 - 03:41 AM

watching the maiden
he writes her a love haiku
tounge has fallen mute




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