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[Archived] {un}holy haiku (Part 2)


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#2131    Blue Star

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Posted 24 January 2013 - 05:04 AM

that the heart needs so
so the heart wants full its will
guild me on my heart


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Posted 24 January 2013 - 05:15 AM

guild me on my heart
a clock that ticks out of time
my heart is broken

"I think there may be "ghost phenomenon" that may be still not fully understood or dismissed, but that doesn't make it spirits of the dead, anymore than "UFO" means "spaceship" or even "UFO" or "spaceship" is directly related to aliens, or anything else. There is way too much assumption and a baseless reliance on anecdotal lore, like when people assert this or that about the spirit world or the astral plane or Ouija board demons, or religion. I say 'says WHO?'" - Paranormalcy

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Posted 24 January 2013 - 06:27 AM

My heart is broken
cracked open the shell broken
now light can shine through


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Posted 24 January 2013 - 06:38 AM

now light can shine through
a story of love and pain
written in reverse

"I think there may be "ghost phenomenon" that may be still not fully understood or dismissed, but that doesn't make it spirits of the dead, anymore than "UFO" means "spaceship" or even "UFO" or "spaceship" is directly related to aliens, or anything else. There is way too much assumption and a baseless reliance on anecdotal lore, like when people assert this or that about the spirit world or the astral plane or Ouija board demons, or religion. I say 'says WHO?'" - Paranormalcy

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Posted 24 January 2013 - 06:44 AM

written in reverse
the luxury of hind sight
foresight still unsure


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Posted 24 January 2013 - 06:46 AM

foresight still unsure
but hindsight twenty twenty
sadness echos now


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Posted 24 January 2013 - 08:25 AM

Sadness echoes now
ricochet my aching heart
into distant quiet


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Posted 24 January 2013 - 09:30 AM

Into distant quiet
Roaring nothing all around
Peace and solitude

Ummon asked : "The world is such a wide world, why do you answer a bell and don ceremonial robes?" ~ Zen Flesh Zen Bones

#2139    Helen of Annoy

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Posted 24 January 2013 - 06:41 PM

peace and solitude
my circles undisturbed, can’t
see that what stands still

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Posted 24 January 2013 - 06:51 PM

see that what stands still
hold your breath, wait to exhale
only time will tell


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Posted 24 January 2013 - 07:02 PM

only time will tell
will my bones turn white in sun
or be home to moss

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Posted 25 January 2013 - 01:08 AM

or be home to moss
silence,solitude holds hope
for all thats to come

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Posted 25 January 2013 - 02:46 AM

for all thats to come
to drift, to see, to witness
in a vast new world

Edited by Wolfman1993, 25 January 2013 - 03:41 AM.


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Posted 25 January 2013 - 04:00 PM

in a vast new world
I find a bit of the same
everything repeats


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Posted 25 January 2013 - 04:32 PM

everything repeats
learn 'what is' in your life spent
'what can be' is freed

Edited by _Only, 25 January 2013 - 04:34 PM.

"I think there may be "ghost phenomenon" that may be still not fully understood or dismissed, but that doesn't make it spirits of the dead, anymore than "UFO" means "spaceship" or even "UFO" or "spaceship" is directly related to aliens, or anything else. There is way too much assumption and a baseless reliance on anecdotal lore, like when people assert this or that about the spirit world or the astral plane or Ouija board demons, or religion. I say 'says WHO?'" - Paranormalcy