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[Archived] {un}holy haiku (Part 2)


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#2311    Overdueleaf

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Posted 24 February 2013 - 12:38 AM

galaxy in cup
swirling mass of fireflies
dancing in darkness

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Your memory IS foggy. It's the pancakes

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Posted 24 February 2013 - 06:26 AM

dancing in darkness
sounds like a recipe for
bruised and broken toes.

We don’t see things as they are. We see things as we are. – Anais Nin

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Posted 24 February 2013 - 07:46 AM

bruised and broken toes
thats what steel toed boots are for,
careful of missteps

Edited by Overdueleaf, 24 February 2013 - 07:47 AM.

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Posted 24 February 2013 - 10:28 AM

careful of missteps
descending the mountain we
carry dreams through snow

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Posted 24 February 2013 - 12:15 PM

carry dreams through snow
if you must. but please make sure
to dodge yellow spots.

We don’t see things as they are. We see things as we are. – Anais Nin

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Posted 24 February 2013 - 01:39 PM

to dodge yellow spots
the colour-blind too with help
of synaesthesia

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Posted 24 February 2013 - 03:11 PM

of synaesthesia
I know precious little
too lazy to learn.....
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We don’t see things as they are. We see things as we are. – Anais Nin

#2318    Helen of Annoy

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Posted 24 February 2013 - 04:19 PM

too lazy to learn...
missed nothing since not all was
meant for everyone

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Posted 24 February 2013 - 04:33 PM

meant for everyone
play acted by sum of parts
for the greater whole

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Posted 24 February 2013 - 04:40 PM

for the greater whole
bringing us new words, our friend -
Helen of Annoy

We don’t see things as they are. We see things as we are. – Anais Nin

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Posted 24 February 2013 - 05:03 PM

Helen of Annoy
she's a haiku supahstahhh
totally awesome!
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Posted 24 February 2013 - 06:39 PM

totally awesome!
gracefully bowing I fell
headfirst in the pit

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Posted 24 February 2013 - 06:46 PM

headfirst in the pit
and as I plummeted down
I screamed so loudly


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Posted 24 February 2013 - 08:40 PM

I screamed so loudly
at that extra syllable
didn’t climb the chair

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Posted 24 February 2013 - 09:15 PM

didn't climb the chair
for fear of falling and so
ran shrieking, away

We don’t see things as they are. We see things as we are. – Anais Nin