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[Archived] {un}holy haiku (Part 2)


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#2791    J. K.

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Posted 30 April 2013 - 08:20 PM

so leads perfectly
sun guides flower in its bloom
petals wide, unfurled

One's reality is another's nightmare.

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Posted 30 April 2013 - 08:34 PM

petals wide, unfurled
buzz of nearby tiny wings
nature's musical


#2793    MysticStrummer

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Posted 30 April 2013 - 10:38 PM

nature's musical
harmony, diversity
human dissonance

Ummon asked : "The world is such a wide world, why do you answer a bell and don ceremonial robes?" ~ Zen Flesh Zen Bones

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Posted 01 May 2013 - 03:55 AM

human dissonance -
fixed today with auto-tune
music is dying

We don’t see things as they are. We see things as we are. – Anais Nin

#2795    _Only

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Posted 01 May 2013 - 04:23 AM

"music is dying"
can't hear this phrase over the
everlasting song

Edited by _Only, 01 May 2013 - 04:23 AM.

"I think there may be "ghost phenomenon" that may be still not fully understood or dismissed, but that doesn't make it spirits of the dead, anymore than "UFO" means "spaceship" or even "UFO" or "spaceship" is directly related to aliens, or anything else. There is way too much assumption and a baseless reliance on anecdotal lore, like when people assert this or that about the spirit world or the astral plane or Ouija board demons, or religion. I say 'says WHO?'" - Paranormalcy

#2796    magnoliaReverie

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Posted 01 May 2013 - 01:42 PM

everlasting song
not just heard but also felt
by those who listen


#2797    ImaLoner

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Posted 01 May 2013 - 06:02 PM

by those who listen
for the slow, gentle rhythm
where the heart should be


#2798    MysticStrummer

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Posted 01 May 2013 - 06:17 PM

where the heart should be
a wallet is inserted
civilization

Ummon asked : "The world is such a wide world, why do you answer a bell and don ceremonial robes?" ~ Zen Flesh Zen Bones

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Posted 02 May 2013 - 01:07 AM

civilization
training each other to fear
while the children dance

"I think there may be "ghost phenomenon" that may be still not fully understood or dismissed, but that doesn't make it spirits of the dead, anymore than "UFO" means "spaceship" or even "UFO" or "spaceship" is directly related to aliens, or anything else. There is way too much assumption and a baseless reliance on anecdotal lore, like when people assert this or that about the spirit world or the astral plane or Ouija board demons, or religion. I say 'says WHO?'" - Paranormalcy

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Posted 02 May 2013 - 04:59 AM

while the children dance
the elders make war for cash
hope remains submerged

Ummon asked : "The world is such a wide world, why do you answer a bell and don ceremonial robes?" ~ Zen Flesh Zen Bones

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Posted 02 May 2013 - 05:09 AM

Hope remains submerged
In the dark pits of lost souls
Helplessly waiting

-I became insane, with long intervals of horrible sanity.//

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Posted 02 May 2013 - 05:18 AM

hopelessly waiting
two parts look for each other
standing back to back

"I think there may be "ghost phenomenon" that may be still not fully understood or dismissed, but that doesn't make it spirits of the dead, anymore than "UFO" means "spaceship" or even "UFO" or "spaceship" is directly related to aliens, or anything else. There is way too much assumption and a baseless reliance on anecdotal lore, like when people assert this or that about the spirit world or the astral plane or Ouija board demons, or religion. I say 'says WHO?'" - Paranormalcy

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Posted 02 May 2013 - 04:19 PM

standing back to back
defending truth against all
attackers of faith


#2804    J. K.

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Posted 02 May 2013 - 05:08 PM

attackers of faith
defenders of liberty
who lacks the vision?

One's reality is another's nightmare.

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Posted 02 May 2013 - 07:31 PM

who lacks the vision?
the mole on top of its hill
blaming hawks for flight

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