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[Archived] {un}holy haiku (Part 2)


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#3331    joc

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Posted 08 October 2013 - 05:04 AM

Crystals shining bright
The Moon in Full Charge for now
The Glass Orb sparkles

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once i believed that starlight could guide me home
now i know that light is old and stars are cold

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Posted 08 October 2013 - 02:49 PM

The Glass Orb sparkles
oil poured on troubled waters
casting weightless stones

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Posted 08 October 2013 - 05:13 PM

casting weightless stones
throws ripples across the pond
that can not be seen


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Posted 08 October 2013 - 05:24 PM

that can not be seen
silent behind vulgar scenes
reaching far ahead

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Posted 08 October 2013 - 05:56 PM

reaching far ahead
tentacles of government
grab our testicles

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Posted 08 October 2013 - 06:00 PM

grab our testicles
men who did not fall from Mars
mirror on the wall

Edited by Helen of Annoy, 08 October 2013 - 06:09 PM.

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Posted 08 October 2013 - 06:29 PM

mirror on the wall
please tell me that I'm all that
and a bag of chips

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Posted 08 October 2013 - 06:37 PM

and a bag of chips
can fly if the wind is right
one, two, potato

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Posted 08 October 2013 - 07:14 PM

one, two, potato
your haiku doesn't make sense
mine doesn't either

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Posted 08 October 2013 - 07:17 PM

mine doesn't either
I haven't stopped believing
I can do something

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Posted 08 October 2013 - 07:46 PM

I can do something
or I too can do nothing
smells like teen spirit


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Posted 08 October 2013 - 07:54 PM

smells like teen spirit
and yet, it tastes like chicken
all fried and greasy

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Posted 09 October 2013 - 03:10 PM

all fried and greasy
never trust those deep-fried foods
They'll give you heart attacks.

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Posted 09 October 2013 - 03:17 PM

they'll give you heart attacks
only if you don't work out
I'll have the cake too

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Posted 09 October 2013 - 04:01 PM

I'll have the cake too
Triple-chocolate, I want
Believe me, it's good

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