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[Archived] {un}holy haiku (Part 2)


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#901    joc

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Posted 08 October 2012 - 03:32 PM

that Winter feeling
all cozied up by the fire
snow swirling around

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once i believed that starlight could guide me home
now i know that light is old and stars are cold

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Posted 08 October 2012 - 03:55 PM

snow swirling around
blinding white not dark but light
hypothermia


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Posted 08 October 2012 - 05:14 PM

Hypothermia
Freezing over like a pond
Death is feeling close





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Posted 08 October 2012 - 08:00 PM

Death is feeling close
Close as the last breath you take
Breath deep the last one

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Posted 09 October 2012 - 06:44 PM

Breath deep the last one,
Water gurgles in the Lungs
Sinking in the dark abyss.


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Posted 09 October 2012 - 10:16 PM

sinking in the dark abyss

View PostProfessor T, on 09 October 2012 - 06:44 PM, said:

Breath deep the last one,
Water gurgles in the Lungs
Sinking in the dark abyss.

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sinking in the dark abyss
cracking bones against sharp rock
settle into sand

What, in all the world, could I do to earn my living and still live as myself, as I knew myself to be? Temporary masks, I knew, had their place; everyone was wearing them, they were the human rage; but not masks cemented in place until the wearer could not breathe and was eventually suffocated.

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Posted 10 October 2012 - 03:06 AM

settle into sand
with a plate of fresh cooked shrimp
ah, the ocean's smell

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Posted 10 October 2012 - 03:28 AM

Ah, the ocean's smell
Blowing salt into my wounds
Waiting for return


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Posted 10 October 2012 - 12:26 PM

Waiting for return
The Mighty Wave washes clean
All wounds are thus healed

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Posted 10 October 2012 - 02:39 PM

"all wounds are thus healed"
what a fairy tale story
waiting for my wave

"I think there may be "ghost phenomenon" that may be still not fully understood or dismissed, but that doesn't make it spirits of the dead, anymore than "UFO" means "spaceship" or even "UFO" or "spaceship" is directly related to aliens, or anything else. There is way too much assumption and a baseless reliance on anecdotal lore, like when people assert this or that about the spirit world or the astral plane or Ouija board demons, or religion. I say 'says WHO?'" - Paranormalcy

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Posted 10 October 2012 - 09:12 PM

waiting for my wave
drowning not waving in fact
who will notice that?

What, in all the world, could I do to earn my living and still live as myself, as I knew myself to be? Temporary masks, I knew, had their place; everyone was wearing them, they were the human rage; but not masks cemented in place until the wearer could not breathe and was eventually suffocated.

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Posted 10 October 2012 - 10:04 PM

who will notice that?
The Infinite Energy
of The Mighty Wave

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Posted 11 October 2012 - 02:46 PM

of the mighty wave
kinetic force propels me
dolphin at my side


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Posted 11 October 2012 - 03:36 PM

dolphin at my side
vast shimmering blue surrounds
I must be dreaming


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Posted 11 October 2012 - 03:58 PM

I must be dreaming
Thought and emotions so free
So this is flying

"I think there may be "ghost phenomenon" that may be still not fully understood or dismissed, but that doesn't make it spirits of the dead, anymore than "UFO" means "spaceship" or even "UFO" or "spaceship" is directly related to aliens, or anything else. There is way too much assumption and a baseless reliance on anecdotal lore, like when people assert this or that about the spirit world or the astral plane or Ouija board demons, or religion. I say 'says WHO?'" - Paranormalcy