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[Archived] {un}holy haiku (Part 2)


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#931    _Only

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Posted 13 October 2012 - 04:54 AM

View Postsarah_444, on 13 October 2012 - 03:55 AM, said:

Where there's muck there's brass
Dirty hands and cold hard cash
Accumulating

(edited 37,000 times because my phone hates me and apparantly  wants to be fired out from the window).

(tries to type u on my phone. "Oops, i." 2nd try, same. 3rd try, "oh you son of a.." 4th try, "fick!!!")

Accumulating
Experiences in life
It's good for some One

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Posted 13 October 2012 - 10:25 AM

It's good for some One
to hold breath out since
life is unverse now

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Posted 13 October 2012 - 07:38 PM

life  unverse now
Now  is the ultimate trip
white water rapids

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now i know that light is old and stars are cold

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Posted 13 October 2012 - 08:22 PM

white water rapids
foam flies up to catch sunlight
rafter flies to death

Life is all too much ............................................. and not enough.

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Posted 13 October 2012 - 08:57 PM

rafter flies to death
crushed between the rocks of fate
destiny swirls on

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Posted 14 October 2012 - 04:23 AM

Destiny swirls on
Gently pulling, surrounding
Hopes reaching sky high


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Posted 14 October 2012 - 04:28 AM

Hopes reaching sky high
dragonflies darting about
inside the caverns

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Posted 14 October 2012 - 04:14 PM

inside the caverns
no more beetles are hiding
not even Ringo

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Posted 14 October 2012 - 04:19 PM

not even Ringo
can save the world from Yoko
Tokyo at risk

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Posted 14 October 2012 - 10:29 PM

Tokyo at risk
from pseudo-zen; one hand claps
on naked grapefruit

Life is all too much ............................................. and not enough.

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Posted 15 October 2012 - 12:45 AM

on naked grapefruit
we all danced the Boho Dance
naked fruits on fruit

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Posted 15 October 2012 - 06:54 PM

Naked fruits on fruit
Bruised and rotting in the sun
Gently tossed aside


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Posted 15 October 2012 - 07:45 PM

Gently tossed aside
Like change on the old dresser
But not forgotten

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Posted 16 October 2012 - 05:56 PM

but not forgotten
just mis-remembered awhile
until view changes

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Posted 17 October 2012 - 05:46 AM

until view changes
hang on all other vision
till mission one

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