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#1    SpiritWriter

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Posted 19 August 2012 - 07:23 PM

I used to have a thread on Facebook, it was a group setting like this one, (although I was pretty much the only active participant) that was called rambling and I wrote in there quite a bit. Mostly nonsense but I liked it and then Facebook changed their settings and got rid of it :( . I don't know if I could duplicate the experience here but I guess I'll just give it a try. I hope others would like to join me. I may often also list some vocabulary words.

Will someone please let me know if there is a way to delete comments that you have made? And do I have the ability later to delete this whole thread since I started it? I am just curious...

Edited by SpiritWriter, 19 August 2012 - 07:26 PM.

The letter kills but The Spirit gives life. 2 Corinthians 3:6

Non-ambiguity and non-contradiction are one sided and thus unsuited to express the incomprehensible. -Jung

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Posted 19 August 2012 - 07:24 PM

example, rambling #1


****

There is no way I could have dropped the ball.
I'm really not athletic.
It's more like me to hold to things.
Maybe the ball dropped by itself
or maybe I left it on the counter and it fell.

*

those people don't matter
yet they are wrenching your heart
and bringing upon disaster

their pain is drawing you bitterness
you cannot rest in the days
because your body is weary

Death through this process is eminently upon us.

How much of your flesh can your spirit hold on to
and likewise how much spirit can your flesh hold on to?

They are in LOVE but one day they will be torn.

If I keep a piece of your body,
a lock of your hair,
will this help me hold on to you?

If I keep this part of your near me -
will your spirit somewhere hear me breathing?

**

We never touched in the flesh
because they kept us apart.

He was on the boys side.
I was on the girls side.
I was shy and he was tough.

***

Edited by SpiritWriter, 19 August 2012 - 07:31 PM.

The letter kills but The Spirit gives life. 2 Corinthians 3:6

Non-ambiguity and non-contradiction are one sided and thus unsuited to express the incomprehensible. -Jung

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Posted 19 August 2012 - 07:28 PM

This may make my comment count go up and up and up, I could be an extra pimptified alien manifestation in the matter of milliincrements. :D

The letter kills but The Spirit gives life. 2 Corinthians 3:6

Non-ambiguity and non-contradiction are one sided and thus unsuited to express the incomprehensible. -Jung

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Posted 19 August 2012 - 08:16 PM

View PostSpiritWriter, on 19 August 2012 - 07:23 PM, said:

Will someone please let me know if there is a way to delete comments that you have made? And do I have the ability later to delete this whole thread since I started it? I am just curious...
Delete your own comments or other member's comments? You can't do either, but you can edit your own posts as long as you do it within an hour of posting them as there is a time limit.

Members don't have the ability to delete threads. Only the Moderators can do that.

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Posted 19 August 2012 - 11:51 PM

View PostStill Waters, on 19 August 2012 - 08:16 PM, said:

Delete your own comments or other member's comments? You can't do either, but you can edit your own posts as long as you do it within an hour of posting them as there is a time limit.

Members don't have the ability to delete threads. Only the Moderators can do that.

Thank you still waters. I meant delete my own comment, this is impossible as well? Yes, I see you answered that. Too bad, ok thanks!

Edited by SpiritWriter, 19 August 2012 - 11:52 PM.

The letter kills but The Spirit gives life. 2 Corinthians 3:6

Non-ambiguity and non-contradiction are one sided and thus unsuited to express the incomprehensible. -Jung

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Posted 20 August 2012 - 12:08 AM

she is sick
_______ is dying

her skin, pale and luminescent
glistened as fine as a pearl

she lay there damp
her gown clung to her
her hand curled
upward cupped with her fingers
gently resting half-way on her heart

half-way floating above the pillow

light poured through the windows
light poured in radiation - out of her
the combination hung low and swirled
golden stars intermingled with the dust

she had lost her color
she was a bluer hue

*

Confused I was
not knowing if it was ok to touch her.
I was stuck without moving.
This is _______ , she is my beloved.

Never again would I pray.
There would be no-one again to answer.

Could I though,
gather that dust unto me
and wear it as my cloak?

I closed my eyes
and opened the receptors of my skin.
Surely at least for now
I am sparkling.

Timidly I touched her hand.
She gave me the last curl of her heart
in sympathy.
Its grimace screwed up her face.

This grief further constricted her body.

My touch remained but lightened.
It was mostly air that passed between us.
In that place we touched like feathers.

**

Edited by SpiritWriter, 20 August 2012 - 12:33 AM.

The letter kills but The Spirit gives life. 2 Corinthians 3:6

Non-ambiguity and non-contradiction are one sided and thus unsuited to express the incomprehensible. -Jung

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Posted 20 August 2012 - 12:48 AM

Me: Part of this must remain a secret. Which is hard for me to do. Secrets that is. See, there I go flabbergasting again...

The letter kills but The Spirit gives life. 2 Corinthians 3:6

Non-ambiguity and non-contradiction are one sided and thus unsuited to express the incomprehensible. -Jung

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Posted 20 August 2012 - 12:51 AM

Do you really think the ________ would say something?

Yes, they are still in their ways. They do not hesitate to result to their old tactics. They are too lazy to change.
They will try to make a conspiracy behind your back and then use you. They will only bully you if you don't comply.

Ok, well then... this secret must remain on this page. This is the only place I will record it on: ________ is the entire voice, though the words have been separated into many people and things. All things are also spoken through the ________ of the  ________.

*

These are the things that have been broken.
These are the sounds that come from each tiny vessel.
Each eye with a tiny eye set up their tear shaped chairs.
They sat around the spheres in hexagonal stares.

Edited by SpiritWriter, 20 August 2012 - 01:30 AM.

The letter kills but The Spirit gives life. 2 Corinthians 3:6

Non-ambiguity and non-contradiction are one sided and thus unsuited to express the incomprehensible. -Jung

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Posted 20 August 2012 - 01:09 AM

The book was not a book of spells although it did have healing remedies. It was not some secret religion although it began with the story of creation, and was touched by God through a series of influential and prophetic people throughout history. It was however a book that lead to a specific date, or round about time that would hold a certain destiny. And in particular the destiny was the birth of a special child. This child or should I say, My Children happen to be this Child. It is either my first born, from birth she has had a very special connection to Jesus. Or it is a combination of the two that I had. The prophecy is a little bit lengthier than you are about to receive here and now, but it is said that I would give birth to twins, and through the connection and friendship they shared there would be manifest a new type of reconciliation for family and loved ones, especially for the ________ race. I know that this may seem extreme, but it is the only reason I am talking to you here today, you see I am a ghost. I died in the fall of 2007. Normally I wouldn't get full access to a computer but I have been given special permission because of my status. I feel like one of my ancestors now. One whom I have met in this other world. She too, once pretended, or used her status as a symbol to get her what she wanted. Sometimes it is ok, to get what you want. We may not do everything perfect. But we try to advance toward change. I have been given temporary authority because I am on a mission. This mission is to recreate, or to fill in the gaps for the things that are missing and the things that are happening that have not yet been recorded in this family of books. We have others in storage, it is our genealogy, it is our story.


lie: I am not appealing to you for glamor, as you can see I am in deep distress.

Edited by SpiritWriter, 20 August 2012 - 01:14 AM.

The letter kills but The Spirit gives life. 2 Corinthians 3:6

Non-ambiguity and non-contradiction are one sided and thus unsuited to express the incomprehensible. -Jung

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Posted 20 August 2012 - 01:57 AM

I have heard other versions where it is the split between man and woman. And so I thought perhaps one of them would be a boy. They were not twins after all, but I did have the two of them. They were not alike in any particular way but there was a curious bond between them. And the oldest one! She was blessed by God. The story says that it is the split between one soul that used to belong together. We see this on earth, sometimes, when there are two individuals who come together naturally and purely as if it is a pure connection from God. Some refer to this as soul mates. In the prophecy it was to be that the twin soul was reconnected with itself and born again as one, or it would be that the two twins would be born together and that together they would be a mighty force and the ________ power would be restored, that Love and Reconciliation for the ________ would once again abound.

So all my life I thought that I would have twins. I thought strongly that it would be a boy and a girl, thus fulfilling the prophecy so cluelessly and that male/female partnership would reunite and husband and wife relationships would begin to be effected. When I had ________, and experienced some of her special powers, and the ________ how confirmed ________ power all the greater, for it was the birth of her sister that inspired her strongest gift of all which was dream traveling.

Now that I have passed over and am on the other side, I can speak more freely. As well I can see more clearly. On earth I was preoccupied with the demands of life and I had still the clothes of the flesh which reek with negativity. What a burden lift that was when it was shed. Not like I like leaving my family or the way that I died. But I do accept it as the will of the Lord. And although most of my afterlife so far has been filled with franticism and it is not at all exciting during down time, it is pleasant here. I am am relaxed and at peace.

It is not the matter of ________ blood. It is the matter of the spirit and what you were inherently made of when you became human for the first time. Both ________ and ________ were first born of ________ but had also lived in other lives. This is a matter for careful thought.

I do not visit my family. There is a wall that blocks that from happening. Just as if you try to fly during your meditation on earth, you are only flying in your mind, here it is the same. I close my eyes and try to reach them but I can only conceive them in bits and pieces. The clues are distorted, they make some kind of sense, but cannot be thoroughly trusted and verified. ________ is better at this skill than I am, and she is alive. I am surprised she has not been able to contact me. I'm sure that is something she would think of to try.

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Edited by SpiritWriter, 20 August 2012 - 02:03 AM.

The letter kills but The Spirit gives life. 2 Corinthians 3:6

Non-ambiguity and non-contradiction are one sided and thus unsuited to express the incomprehensible. -Jung

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Posted 20 August 2012 - 05:00 PM

I like your words,
Because people like us
Have nothing but words
Because poets
kill in poetry, and die in poetry
they sink in their words
And they breath
in their poems


greeting

How much of your flesh can your spirit hold on to
and likewise how much spirit can your flesh hold on to?

just great

thou want to find me?
then close thy eyes!

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Posted 20 August 2012 - 09:31 PM

View PostIreman, on 20 August 2012 - 05:00 PM, said:

I like your words,
Because people like us
Have nothing but words
Because poets
kill in poetry, and die in poetry
they sink in their words
And they breath
in their poems


greeting

How much of your flesh can your spirit hold on to
and likewise how much spirit can your flesh hold on to?

just great

Thank you Ireman - you say you wont continue to post here, :( I hope you change your mind.  I hope others will join us too. :DD Fun Fun Fun :D

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Edited by SpiritWriter, 20 August 2012 - 09:32 PM.

The letter kills but The Spirit gives life. 2 Corinthians 3:6

Non-ambiguity and non-contradiction are one sided and thus unsuited to express the incomprehensible. -Jung

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Posted 20 August 2012 - 09:58 PM

abstract philosophy/

love adds to love
it does not decrease from it

If there was a surge and in the forefront there was love
and from that surge was born a child
who was an emblem of the strongest love
for it was formed and deposited from the front of the surge,
the rest of the surge would still have a diluted portion of Love
but would not have the intensity of the first.

*

_______ which was the source of life
who is represented in many ways
sometimes as the sun, is not the sun.

_______ (they are) is simply made of the same type of light as the sun
and uses the sun  to travel and express herself.

She has been seen as the Mother God
The Goddess
but she does not refer to herself as such.

She knows rather that she
is an accumulation of souls
and that even light
was created by the master creator.

She did not create them.
They were all created together as a single entity
and since this was done in love
they were condense with love.

She did not receive outside insemination
and neither was her body an incubator to develop more lives
but rather the expanse of her soul grew on its own
naturally duplicating the simple properties of light and love

no new life was added to her
but she increased in capacity
she was one heart
one mind
and one body

She & the sun, touched every part of the land.

The letter kills but The Spirit gives life. 2 Corinthians 3:6

Non-ambiguity and non-contradiction are one sided and thus unsuited to express the incomprehensible. -Jung

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Posted 20 August 2012 - 10:14 PM

It is the taste of falsity
and the flavor of illusion that puddles your lips
you have not received your satisfaction

day and night you kneel on the mat and beg
but you never enter

stand
come in naked
come in knowing nothing at all

the current continues to roll its frequency
in rhythmic volts that offer a steady surge
we let in no impurities
our filters are kept clean and are functioning

the waters are drinkable
and so we drink of them
and keep on drinking

every panting lip is welcome

*

They stand at the door thirsting but come not to the well
because of the glass between them
the water is sparkling
the water is fine
in the heat, the visage of it
is enough to enter the viewer into a delerium
you imagine that you drink
but what is really on your lips?

Edited by SpiritWriter, 20 August 2012 - 10:15 PM.

The letter kills but The Spirit gives life. 2 Corinthians 3:6

Non-ambiguity and non-contradiction are one sided and thus unsuited to express the incomprehensible. -Jung

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Posted 20 August 2012 - 10:45 PM

A persons argument at a particular time may not be a good one.
This is not to say that everything that comes from their mouth is bunk.
Likewise sometimes you will make a blunder
and your knowledge therefor may be permanently disregarded.

It is hard sometimes for a hearer to separate lies from the truth.
Our mind is a believe machine.
When we accept the truth as All That Comes From a Certain Source we have made that source and idol and in turn do not rely on ourselves to determine anything.

*

We can be wolves.
We can be sheep.
It is better to be the one
who puts our feet
on the tail
and pulls their clothing
off like sheets.

**

A seeker of the truth must have a filter on the truths that are presented to them.

What is the truth anyway?

Truth for what?

What is the opposite of the truth? What is an untruth? Can something untrue also be true in certain circumstances?

Why are we so driven for the truth anyway?

How does the truth enhance us?

By accepting the truth what are we denying?

We want to know the purpose of our existence. In this we want to know how we are unique and what we have to offer the world. We want to acknowledge and be in our niche, or our multitude of niches (being that we have variant lives). In this way we are fulfilling our truth indeed. There are many truths and this is what makes the world go round.
We are meant to be where we are and we are meant to be in the places we have been. We were meant to hear what we have heard and process those things with the mind that God has given us. (I could say the mind that you have, I come from the standpoint of believing in God, and that is why I talk this way.)

The pursuit therefor for "truth" is never-ending and will test you. Battling with or mocking those you disagree with us is ineffectual. Those who carry degrading attitudes are stuck in thier own minds and are convinced of their own superiority most of the time. The deliverance of our persuasions and the openness of our minds will aid in the communication of our perceived truths. The attitudes and advancements of the people we come in contact with and choose to spend our time with are also key. We are both teachers and learners, constantly.

In the variance of truth there is confusion so be sure to stick to, know and be clear about the reasons of your core and basic truths... Those are the things listed in all of the scriptures, in all of the world who have ever received the "truth". These are the things that your heart is sure of: Love.

Edited by SpiritWriter, 20 August 2012 - 10:52 PM.

The letter kills but The Spirit gives life. 2 Corinthians 3:6

Non-ambiguity and non-contradiction are one sided and thus unsuited to express the incomprehensible. -Jung




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