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#1    Knight Of Shadows

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Posted 11 November 2012 - 09:39 AM

can we pretend for a second mere that darkness is gone and the light is here
and from the mist of years outside my dreams you appear


can we pretend the world is unending and the moments pass slowly and our love impending
and from the shadows of a weary day you pass this way


the path you came spread out with roses the sun engulf the moon and her light imposes
and from the shine in your eyes the stars shy away and hide in the skies


gracefully the trees are dancing in the breeze the silver rivers flowing with ease
although there's no heaven or hell to the endless abyss of love we fell



as i wake up from my peaceful slumber to a world where darkness chases to conquer
and in my hands those roses sear as i try to keep them near


the world is dark and filled with sorrow no one knows what tragic fate comes tomorrow
meaningless comes the morrow and yet we struggle to follow


the path i came torched with flames the sun sinks in darkness and hide with shame
the time chasing years to kill and daylight has fallen ill


i've seen darkness buries the sun , the winds and fog played catch and run
the rivers  goes all wrong and the current is raging strong

and we're caught up in the middle of this song


the trees overcomed sink underneath the earth , inhaling frustration in final attempt of rebirth
there's a life versus vice , a song never to be played twice
and still here we dance on melting ice



but through nocturnal charm through the horizon and endless depth afar
with auguries of daylight , in the company of gusts of delight


a fragment comes to life waiting for a hope , hanging to life by a tender rope
a white dove takes a flight towards the last dying light


reunited with what used to be a lovely velvet sky
chasing traces of delight as they desperately  fly


as my pen lies helpless in my hand every letter i write turns to sand
wandering if it's too late as the rolling dice plays my fate

tons of torn letters lies restless in the fire
left with nothing but an insatiable desire

how many times i tried to write you off my head
but my heart always been one step ahead

i finally lay down to sleep and deep in my heart your memory i will keep
will the waves of tide bring you back to me or will they always flee



"why should we not rely on Allah when he guided us our path . we shall certainly bear with patience all the hurt you may cause us. for those who want to put their trust in someone should put their trust in Allah.


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Posted 11 November 2012 - 09:59 AM

KOS I had no idea you felt this way about me...I'm very flattered lol jk!

Serious though, that's beautiful :)


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Posted 11 November 2012 - 11:25 AM

hehehe thanks VV for your kind comment

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Posted 11 November 2012 - 11:50 AM

I knew people from hell weren't that bad lol does it cool off at all down there for winter?


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Posted 11 November 2012 - 12:06 PM

did you write this knight?

its really beautiful.. the whole poem is perfect.. was a joy to read.. thanks for sharing.. you should publish it..


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Posted 11 November 2012 - 12:28 PM

View PostViviana98, on 11 November 2012 - 11:50 AM, said:

I knew people from hell weren't that bad lol does it cool off at all down there for winter?
i guess am special .. carefull of flames :P

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Posted 11 November 2012 - 12:29 PM

View Postwith bells on, on 11 November 2012 - 12:06 PM, said:

did you write this knight?

its really beautiful.. the whole poem is perfect.. was a joy to read.. thanks for sharing.. you should publish it..
i don't write daily or often only at certain moods as hobby
thanks for passing by and  comment man glad you enjoyed it

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Posted 11 November 2012 - 12:38 PM

you're a true artist and a talent..


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Posted 11 November 2012 - 07:43 PM

That was truely brilliant..
:tu:


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Posted 12 November 2012 - 02:10 AM

View PostProfessor T, on 11 November 2012 - 07:43 PM, said:

That was truely brilliant..
:tu:
thanks mate glad you liked it

View Postwith bells on said:

you're a true artist and a talent..
i approicate it thanks

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Posted 13 November 2012 - 08:43 AM

View PostKnight Of Shadows, on 11 November 2012 - 09:39 AM, said:

can we pretend for a second mere that darkness is gone and the light is here
and from the mist of years outside my dreams you appear


can we pretend the world is unending and the moments pass slowly and our love impending
and from the shadows of a weary day you pass this way


the path you came spread out with roses the sun engulf the moon and her light imposes
and from the shine in your eyes the stars shy away and hide in the skies


gracefully the trees are dancing in the breeze the silver rivers flowing with ease
although there's no heaven or hell to the endless abyss of love we fell



as i wake up from my peaceful slumber to a world where darkness chases to conquer
and in my hands those roses sear as i try to keep them near


the world is dark and filled with sorrow no one knows what tragic fate comes tomorrow
meaningless comes the morrow and yet we struggle to follow


the path i came torched with flames the sun sinks in darkness and hide with shame
the time chasing years to kill and daylight has fallen ill


i've seen darkness buries the sun , the winds and fog played catch and run
the rivers  goes all wrong and the current is raging strong

and we're caught up in the middle of this song


the trees overcomed sink underneath the earth , inhaling frustration in final attempt of rebirth
there's a life versus vice , a song never to be played twice
and still here we dance on melting ice



but through nocturnal charm through the horizon and endless depth afar
with auguries of daylight , in the company of gusts of delight


a fragment comes to life waiting for a hope , hanging to life by a tender rope
a white dove takes a flight towards the last dying light


reunited with what used to be a lovely velvet sky
chasing traces of delight as they desperately  fly


as my pen lies helpless in my hand every letter i write turns to sand
wandering if it's too late as the rolling dice plays my fate

tons of torn letters lies restless in the fire
left with nothing but an insatiable desire

how many times i tried to write you off my head
but my heart always been one step ahead

i finally lay down to sleep and deep in my heart your memory i will keep
will the waves of tide bring you back to me or will they always flee


It's gorgeous, and saddening...Love it.

View PostViviana98, on 11 November 2012 - 09:59 AM, said:

KOS I had no idea you felt this way about me...I'm very flattered lol jk!

Serious though, that's beautiful :)

Darn, I wish someone would write stuff like this for me

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Posted 13 November 2012 - 09:10 AM

View PostHeartsAreForBreaking, on 13 November 2012 - 08:43 AM, said:

It's gorgeous, and saddening...Love it.



Darn, I wish someone would write stuff like this for me

Okay....ahem.

Roses are red, violets are blue
If hearts were for breaking, we'd be born with two

That should really be published its pretty amazing ahaha that's all I got :P


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Posted 13 November 2012 - 09:23 AM

View PostViviana98, on 13 November 2012 - 09:10 AM, said:

Okay....ahem.

Roses are red, violets are blue
If hearts were for breaking, we'd be born with two

That should really be published its pretty amazing ahaha that's all I got :P
*wipes a tear from my eye* absolutely brilliant, standing ovation :P

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Posted 13 November 2012 - 09:29 AM

ohh you two .. if you wanna kiss let me know in advance to get my camera

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Posted 14 November 2012 - 06:58 AM

View PostKnight Of Shadows, on 13 November 2012 - 09:29 AM, said:

ohh you two .. if you wanna kiss let me know in advance to get my camera

Oh baby!

View PostViviana98, on 13 November 2012 - 09:10 AM, said:



Okay....ahem.

Roses are red, violets are blue
If hearts were for breaking, we'd be born with two

That should really be published its pretty amazing ahaha that's all I got :P

Oh, oh, my turn!

Roses are red, violets are blue
....what rhymes with blue?

Well, it's a work in progress.

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