Knight Of Shadows Posted November 11, 2012 #1 Share Posted November 11, 2012 can we pretend for a second mere that darkness is gone and the light is here and from the mist of years outside my dreams you appear can we pretend the world is unending and the moments pass slowly and our love impending and from the shadows of a weary day you pass this way the path you came spread out with roses the sun engulf the moon and her light imposes and from the shine in your eyes the stars shy away and hide in the skies gracefully the trees are dancing in the breeze the silver rivers flowing with ease although there's no heaven or hell to the endless abyss of love we fell as i wake up from my peaceful slumber to a world where darkness chases to conquer and in my hands those roses sear as i try to keep them near the world is dark and filled with sorrow no one knows what tragic fate comes tomorrow meaningless comes the morrow and yet we struggle to follow the path i came torched with flames the sun sinks in darkness and hide with shame the time chasing years to kill and daylight has fallen ill i've seen darkness buries the sun , the winds and fog played catch and run the rivers goes all wrong and the current is raging strong and we're caught up in the middle of this song the trees overcomed sink underneath the earth , inhaling frustration in final attempt of rebirth there's a life versus vice , a song never to be played twice and still here we dance on melting ice but through nocturnal charm through the horizon and endless depth afar with auguries of daylight , in the company of gusts of delight a fragment comes to life waiting for a hope , hanging to life by a tender rope a white dove takes a flight towards the last dying light reunited with what used to be a lovely velvet sky chasing traces of delight as they desperately fly as my pen lies helpless in my hand every letter i write turns to sand wandering if it's too late as the rolling dice plays my fate tons of torn letters lies restless in the fire left with nothing but an insatiable desire how many times i tried to write you off my head but my heart always been one step ahead i finally lay down to sleep and deep in my heart your memory i will keep will the waves of tide bring you back to me or will they always flee 5 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Viviana98 Posted November 11, 2012 #2 Share Posted November 11, 2012 KOS I had no idea you felt this way about me...I'm very flattered lol jk! Serious though, that's beautiful 2 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Knight Of Shadows Posted November 11, 2012 Author #3 Share Posted November 11, 2012 hehehe thanks VV for your kind comment 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Viviana98 Posted November 11, 2012 #4 Share Posted November 11, 2012 I knew people from hell weren't that bad lol does it cool off at all down there for winter? 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
with bells on Posted November 11, 2012 #5 Share Posted November 11, 2012 did you write this knight? its really beautiful.. the whole poem is perfect.. was a joy to read.. thanks for sharing.. you should publish it.. 2 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Knight Of Shadows Posted November 11, 2012 Author #6 Share Posted November 11, 2012 I knew people from hell weren't that bad lol does it cool off at all down there for winter? i guess am special .. carefull of flames 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Knight Of Shadows Posted November 11, 2012 Author #7 Share Posted November 11, 2012 did you write this knight? its really beautiful.. the whole poem is perfect.. was a joy to read.. thanks for sharing.. you should publish it.. i don't write daily or often only at certain moods as hobby thanks for passing by and comment man glad you enjoyed it Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
with bells on Posted November 11, 2012 #8 Share Posted November 11, 2012 you're a true artist and a talent.. 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Professor T Posted November 11, 2012 #9 Share Posted November 11, 2012 That was truely brilliant.. 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Knight Of Shadows Posted November 12, 2012 Author #10 Share Posted November 12, 2012 That was truely brilliant.. thanks mate glad you liked it you're a true artist and a talent.. i approicate it thanks Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Miss Shadows Posted November 13, 2012 #11 Share Posted November 13, 2012 can we pretend for a second mere that darkness is gone and the light is here and from the mist of years outside my dreams you appear can we pretend the world is unending and the moments pass slowly and our love impending and from the shadows of a weary day you pass this way the path you came spread out with roses the sun engulf the moon and her light imposes and from the shine in your eyes the stars shy away and hide in the skies gracefully the trees are dancing in the breeze the silver rivers flowing with ease although there's no heaven or hell to the endless abyss of love we fell as i wake up from my peaceful slumber to a world where darkness chases to conquer and in my hands those roses sear as i try to keep them near the world is dark and filled with sorrow no one knows what tragic fate comes tomorrow meaningless comes the morrow and yet we struggle to follow the path i came torched with flames the sun sinks in darkness and hide with shame the time chasing years to kill and daylight has fallen ill i've seen darkness buries the sun , the winds and fog played catch and run the rivers goes all wrong and the current is raging strong and we're caught up in the middle of this song the trees overcomed sink underneath the earth , inhaling frustration in final attempt of rebirth there's a life versus vice , a song never to be played twice and still here we dance on melting ice but through nocturnal charm through the horizon and endless depth afar with auguries of daylight , in the company of gusts of delight a fragment comes to life waiting for a hope , hanging to life by a tender rope a white dove takes a flight towards the last dying light reunited with what used to be a lovely velvet sky chasing traces of delight as they desperately fly as my pen lies helpless in my hand every letter i write turns to sand wandering if it's too late as the rolling dice plays my fate tons of torn letters lies restless in the fire left with nothing but an insatiable desire how many times i tried to write you off my head but my heart always been one step ahead i finally lay down to sleep and deep in my heart your memory i will keep will the waves of tide bring you back to me or will they always flee It's gorgeous, and saddening...Love it. KOS I had no idea you felt this way about me...I'm very flattered lol jk! Serious though, that's beautiful Darn, I wish someone would write stuff like this for me 2 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Viviana98 Posted November 13, 2012 #12 Share Posted November 13, 2012 It's gorgeous, and saddening...Love it. Darn, I wish someone would write stuff like this for me Okay....ahem. Roses are red, violets are blue If hearts were for breaking, we'd be born with two That should really be published its pretty amazing ahaha that's all I got 2 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Miss Shadows Posted November 13, 2012 #13 Share Posted November 13, 2012 Okay....ahem. Roses are red, violets are blue If hearts were for breaking, we'd be born with two That should really be published its pretty amazing ahaha that's all I got *wipes a tear from my eye* absolutely brilliant, standing ovation 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Knight Of Shadows Posted November 13, 2012 Author #14 Share Posted November 13, 2012 ohh you two .. if you wanna kiss let me know in advance to get my camera 2 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Miss Shadows Posted November 14, 2012 #15 Share Posted November 14, 2012 ohh you two .. if you wanna kiss let me know in advance to get my camera Oh baby! Okay....ahem. Roses are red, violets are blue If hearts were for breaking, we'd be born with two That should really be published its pretty amazing ahaha that's all I got Oh, oh, my turn! Roses are red, violets are blue ....what rhymes with blue? Well, it's a work in progress. 2 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Knight Of Shadows Posted November 14, 2012 Author #16 Share Posted November 14, 2012 Oh baby! Oh, oh, my turn! Roses are red, violets are blue ....what rhymes with blue? Well, it's a work in progress. if i had them both i'd give them all to you Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Viviana98 Posted November 14, 2012 #17 Share Posted November 14, 2012 Oh baby! Oh, oh, my turn! Roses are red, violets are blue ....what rhymes with blue? Well, it's a work in progress. Its perfect! Don't change a thing I love it! lol Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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