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#1    orangepeaceful79

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Posted 17 November 2012 - 03:47 PM

I tried to write a poem
but today it just doesn't seem to be working
damn words are jumbly-mumbly
like pulling teeth
or excalibur
ooh wait!  a metaphor
two actually
maybe this poem will
breathe its first breath still...
dot dot dot....my fingers tap
a smile curls my lips
how clever am I
to have turned the lack of a poem
into a poem
I wonder if you the reader will
appreciate my wit
or if you will move along
without "liking" it at all
I am not always aware
of the amount of flotsam
drifting in my stream of
consciousness
but here it is, just the the same
what a damn mess.


#2    Mistydawn

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Posted 17 November 2012 - 07:12 PM

ha ha ha ha ha !!! Good one! :clap:

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Posted 17 November 2012 - 07:14 PM

View PostMistydawn, on 17 November 2012 - 07:12 PM, said:

ha ha ha ha ha !!! Good one! :clap:

Thanks very much :)


#4    SpiritWriter

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Posted 17 November 2012 - 09:25 PM

reading the 'tap tap tap' of a poets mind is always intriguing...

The letter kills but The Spirit gives life. 2 Corinthians 3:6

Non-ambiguity and non-contradiction are one sided and thus unsuited to express the incomprehensible. -Jung

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Posted 17 November 2012 - 11:21 PM

View PostSpiritWriter, on 17 November 2012 - 09:25 PM, said:

reading the 'tap tap tap' of a poets mind is always intriguing...

Thanks :)  Although I'm quite certain my brain is a very overtaxed hamster running on a rusty wheel.  Wonder how much longer the lil guy will hold out?


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Posted 17 November 2012 - 11:44 PM

*likes*....It's a clever piece.

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