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#1    Avatar Samantha Ai

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Posted 27 November 2012 - 04:23 PM

It was the end of the county fair
firework displays in the clean air
"people will pay a million for this"
my old man would say breathing it in

the scent of gunpowder becoming feint
arrows and pistols, cowboys and you
in the middle of town square
it's us versus them and we're going to win

the war should be splendid
land for green, green miles
soldiers and ufos and mindless drones
they are listening in on your cell phone

I don't like to feel like a loser
and right now
you are making me feel like one
because they lied to us on nine-eleven

Spoiler


Edited by I believe you, 27 November 2012 - 04:31 PM.


#2    Mistydawn

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Posted 28 November 2012 - 02:35 PM

Wao, awesome!

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Posted 29 November 2012 - 04:13 PM

I don't understand why, but something about it reminded me of a few of Ray Bradbury's works...
Thank you.


#4    Avatar Samantha Ai

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Posted 30 November 2012 - 06:23 AM

Thank you both. This is the greatest response I've had so feels great and thanks again. It was quite spontaneous.





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