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[The Id3al Experience]

Breaking Free

Break free from the paddock

Break free from the bond

Break free from the shackles

Free to see beyond.

Break free from emotion

Break free from unconscious act

Break free from the lies you tell yourself,

Free to see ALL the facts.

Break free from the idea

Break free from the myth

Break free from that thought,

Free for a consciousness shift.

[Professor T]

Kapai!
Brilliant..

[e u n O i a]

This was a lot of fun to read. I read it out loud too!


I like it.

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Professor T, on 12 December 2012 - 01:55 AM, said:

Kapai!
Brilliant..

Thank you Professor T. Kapai? You know Maori? or from New Zealand?

Kind Regards,
Me

e u n O i a, on 12 December 2012 - 02:00 AM, said:

This was a lot of fun to read. I read it out loud too!


I like it.

Im glad you enjoyed it, This is only my second poem I have produced so far. I am really loving expressing myself this way.

Kind Regards,
Me

PS. Welcome to UM

Edited by The Id3al Experience, 12 December 2012 - 02:57 AM.

[Professor T]

The Id3al Experience, on 12 December 2012 - 02:56 AM, said:

Thank you Professor T. Kapai? You know Maori? or from New Zealand?

Kind Regards,
Me

Kiora!
Yeah, I'm from the land of the long white cloud..
Pakeha..
That poem is spot on imo. It's something people should live by as well as a great piece of work.  

The only thing I don't like about it is I didn't write it.

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Professor T, on 12 December 2012 - 03:28 AM, said:

Kiora!
Yeah, I'm from the land of the long white cloud..
Pakeha..
That poem is spot on imo. It's something people should live by as well as a great piece of work.  

The only thing I don't like about it is I didn't write it.

Haha, Nice - Same here good old Pakeha from good old wellywood (haha).

Thank you, this is only my second poem, but after I mediate the mind is so clear and easy to let it flow.

Im sure you are capable of writing also - "we are move than we think, we only fail to see this becasue we act like we know"

[Professor T]

The Id3al Experience, on 12 December 2012 - 09:24 PM, said:

Haha, Nice - Same here good old Pakeha from good old wellywood (haha).

Thank you, this is only my second poem, but after I mediate the mind is so clear and easy to let it flow.

Im sure you are capable of writing also - "we are move than we think, we only fail to see this becasue we act like we know"

Naki lad me.

Yeah, I write, and draw, and make sculptures..
My Avatar is one of mine..

Check out the writers & Artist Forum..
http://www.unexplain...hp?showforum=68

Edited by Professor T, 12 December 2012 - 11:34 PM.

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Professor T, on 12 December 2012 - 11:27 PM, said:

Naki lad me.

Yeah, I write, and draw, and make sculptures..
My Avatar is one of mine..

Check out the writers & Artist Forum..
http://www.unexplain...hp?showforum=68

LOL why is it that I seem to attract Naki people lol.. couple of my best mates are from there. ha.

Nice Forum, I like your art, very talented, and love your alien avatar.

I use to be a really big drawer however branched off into music playing drums etc. Now it seems poetry is the newest form of expression. I love art and the beauity that can be portrayed through such methods.

Keep up the good work.

Kind Regards,
Me

[Professor T]

The Id3al Experience, on 13 December 2012 - 02:50 AM, said:

LOL why is it that I seem to attract Naki people lol.. couple of my best mates are from there. ha.

Nice Forum, I like your art, very talented, and love your alien avatar.

I use to be a really big drawer however branched off into music playing drums etc. Now it seems poetry is the newest form of expression. I love art and the beauity that can be portrayed through such methods.

Keep up the good work.

Kind Regards,
Me

Thanks..